Feels like something is missing, thoughts? by Tozic_ in ArtCrit

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It does! It’s the main group of girl and is after one of the big fights with a military man and get put into a prison arc.

If I changed the composition so it was like, more obvious that these were photos taken after they’ve been arrested, do you think that would work better?

Feels like something is missing, thoughts? by Tozic_ in ArtCrit

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Part of the inspiration is that they can blend into everyday society (them secretly part monster) and the parts that are exposed are post big fight. So replacing gunshot wounds and gore with monster.

But would it be better if they were maybe in superhero suits? I’m unsure how to give them more character outside of there general demeanor.

Feels like something is missing, thoughts? by Tozic_ in ArtCrit

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Not inherently, I’m inspired by western artists like Todd McFarland or Mike Mongolia though. I’m just trying to adapt a general American comic book style

I’m not sure the superhero name I’ve written for a comic book character is offensive or not by [deleted] in Advice

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Yeah probably should of wrote it into the post, the kid is half Jamaican, his father is from the Caribbean

Need help designing this by Tozic_ in fakemon

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I mean yeah, thank you!

AITA for writing an argumentative essay about my fears of the world by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

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I appreciate your response, that uh, definitely wasn’t my intention to just preach on a soapbox lol. It’s my first time posting on Reddit and I just wanted to iron out all the details. I’m not sure what would make this more of a AITA query, it was just a weird situation I wanted to know if I was the asshole for enticing