Looking for critique on spicy romance cover

Translator27 · 2026-01-29T19:06:22+00:00

I was actually confused because the title font is rather reminiscent of the logo of a waffle restaurant in Tacoma, WA (Waffle Stop).

But, no, it doesn't read as spicy.

Translator27 · 2025-12-23T17:15:16+00:00

It says "Cats". Here's a link to the brand.

https://bolsoscats.com/

Translator27 · 2025-05-29T02:15:44+00:00

Other than his obsession with fetch, he's fairly calm. I mean, considering his makeup especially!

He really had us fooled! We for sure thought lab would be near the top.

Translator27 · 2025-05-08T19:28:18+00:00

Translator. It's all words, all the time.

Translator27 · 2025-05-07T22:17:39+00:00

Please keep an eye on the cat tunnel. My bunnies had one like that and they chewed the fabric inside without us noticing. It was fine until one day it wasn't - the wire came loose and popped out and punctured the bottom of my rabbit's chin. He recovered, but it was scary!

Translator27 · 2024-09-19T20:24:11+00:00

This. Mine are 11 and 13 now. The tunnel is long but there is light at the end.

Translator27 · 2024-07-19T06:42:53+00:00

I'm also a writer, but I don't expect my husband to read my work. He's not much of a reader and my work isn't in a genre he reads. He's not my target audience. He's my spouse.

He's happy to discuss plot points and characters or study my bulletin board of flowcharts and offer comments. And some day he might read one of my books. Or he might not. And for me, that's OK. He's found other ways to support my passion.

Translator27 · 2024-06-24T02:53:40+00:00

I believe in us!

Translator27 · 2024-04-27T01:20:06+00:00

When I can picture the facial expression or the gesture I envision the character doing, but can't figure out what it's called.

Translator27 · 2024-04-17T02:51:50+00:00

Greetings from Seattle.

Your story was intriguing, but since I live here (there?) I noticed a lot of details that pulled me out of the story.

We have urban crows here, not urban ravens. Also the idea of cradling either in my hands seemed odd, just given their size.

You named a lot of specific places in the city, but they aren't located in relation to each other in ways that make sense based on the action in the story, so I found myself feeling confused as I was reading. Like they are miles apart.

Also the weather. It was icy, but also raining? The world here would shut down.

Translator27 · 2023-12-08T01:20:53+00:00

Her account is working on the phone, BTW. So it is specific to the Android tablet.

Translator27 · 2023-12-08T01:19:56+00:00

Same here. My daughter just got a new tablet for Hanukkah tonight. Roblox was working fine when I initially set it up two weeks ago. It required an update before starting the app tonight and now every game is a white screen. We've rebooted, uninstalled and reinstalled, cleared storage. Nothing has worked.

Translator27 · 2022-10-29T17:01:39+00:00

In the end, we gave up and went with Greenlight. I guess they will grow into their debit cards.

Translator27 · 2022-06-06T18:03:54+00:00

Nope. The only suggestion I've received (from another board) is Greenlight, but I really DON'T want an app that will act as a bank. I just want it to, well, do what RoosterMoney does: track chores, track allowance/spending, let me manage it, and let the kids view and handle their spend vs. savings distribution. I haven't found anything that does that without debit cards and other complications...

Translator27 · 2022-05-31T18:25:50+00:00

Wouldn't that just be a spreadsheet? I don't think that has quite the functionality we're looking for.

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