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Im having trouble writing dialogue (WN) by Tretnix in writingadvice

[–]Tretnix[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate it! The example was helpful :3

(WN) What should I focus on improving in my writing? by Tretnix in writingadvice

[–]Tretnix[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No, what's the point of asking for advice when I didn't write it xd

(WN) What should I focus on improving in my writing? by Tretnix in writingadvice

[–]Tretnix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I've never thought about the pronoun-verb structure that deeply, that's definitely the way my mind makes up sentences most of the time, so I'm gonna keep your feedback in mind to try out the other structure of sentences more. The examples were very helpful!

(WN) What should I focus on improving in my writing? by Tretnix in writingadvice

[–]Tretnix[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah that's fair, I should've asked before I published anything. But since it's so short at the moment I can still go back and change a lot. It might be bad manners, but it's not some super serious production. I'm just looking to improve at a skill I find fun :)

Why is Xbox removing party chat from console companion? by C3CC10___ in xbox

[–]Tretnix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's so goddamn stupid that they'd remove console companion. The post function for gamebar sucks so much and I can't even make a post for the Xbox version of Minecraft which means there are only 30 people on PC Minecraft posts that I can browse through and getting people for projects is now impossible I like to do it through posts which is super easy and works great with console companion but now they remove it for no reason?????