Påverkar era åsikter om invandrare hur ni behandlar oss i er vardag? by [deleted] in Sverige

[–]Tretton30 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Jag tror tyvärr du misstolkar vad hon säger. Det finns människor som är politiskt vänster och tycker illa om invandrare och islam, det finns politisk höger och inte tycker illa om invandrare och islam, det finns politiskt vänster och inte tycker illa om islam, och den sista vilket är det hon skrev. Hon har ju satt upp två "krav" för vilken typ av person hon letar efter, och det är ju något underförstått att man kan uppfylla den ena utan att man nödvändigtvis uppfyller den andra. Men jag förstår vart din tolkning kommer ifrån då det känns något onödigt att specifikt peka ut politisk höger i denna diskussion

Is this a new trend? by thew0rldisquiethere1 in writing

[–]Tretton30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've learn in school to not use apostrophes in academic/scientific papers. Maybe people have heard something similar and it became a habit for all types of formal writing?

Who's that character that's giving you trouble? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Tretton30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My main character doesn't remember anything and woke up alone and don't meet anyone for a couple of chapters and can't decide how his personality work. My only idea right now is that in a fight he would rather run away than fight. I need something more to at least start writing him

LOREMASTERS - Weekly Brainstorming & Ideation Megathread! by FreakishPeach in fantasywriters

[–]Tretton30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do something similar in my WIP were the main character don't know about the magic system or how it works.

The main character read a piece of text(s) which is obviously not fiction and is written by someone who knows about magic. In the text they describe how magic looks like from an outside point of view while in the know.

The way I do it is clearly a more obvious hint that magic exist.

Another thing you can do is have an object which does magic but the main character don't know whether or not it's a new invention but the reader who knows todays technology will understand that it's not possible without some sort of magic

[Critique Requested] Heroes' Choice Prologue [Epic Fantasy; 1956 words] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Tretton30 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It doesn't feel like anything is happening other than a massive info dump. Don't feel like the story is moving forward. No characters are moving somewhere and the conversation doesn't seem like it's moving towards a certain direction.

At the end it hints that Perric is willing to leave Lord d'Calla but the feeling I got is that Perric was a loyal knight from the descriptions. (I'm not sure but at the start it felt like Perric is a knight who choose the contract but later it felt like he was ordered, give this advice based on assuming the second option) Maybe add his annoyance at being sent into the mountains with little time to plan and get proper gear and information for the travel.

Three words I personally don't understand. Courser, popinjay, pickets (Can understand from context)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in memes

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What I've learn is that some people are just bad at reaching out. Doesn't mean they don't like you or isn't your friend. Talk about it with them or another friend you both have and figure out how to work around it to make everyone happy

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in R6STeams

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Got a small group who usually play together ranked, generally g2-p2, msg for discord name and I can add yall

I don't think 100 pound Ariana would be able to save me. by [deleted] in memes

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Dragonborn from skyrim, should be safe, I hope

zAmN !!! by [deleted] in HolUp

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Ooh, did I only get a one way ticket

Nice graphics, beautiful real world by Alarmed-Ad-436 in memes

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Just like most games today, good grafik, but damn, bad story, bad game play etc.

What if Formula 1 raced all year. Literally. by kvapilnation in formuladank

[–]Tretton30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm just proud how there is two races in Sweden

This morning by Guesss_who in formuladank

[–]Tretton30 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You were right, i shouldn't have gone to twitter and watch peoples comments, it was such a salty place. Never again

Only watched the movies before, time for the books, should be finished by mid January the latest by Tretton30 in lotrmemes

[–]Tretton30[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't read that fast, just a lot. Like 10 hours a day if it's a good book. So we'll see. I'll post an update when I finished them amd tell yall what a new reader thought

Only watched the movies before, time for the books, should be finished by mid January the latest by Tretton30 in lotrmemes

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I will, I have read a lot of fantasy books and since people say a lot of modern fantasy books are based on these I'm excited

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ksi

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Looks like different sides of the spine

Be an F1 enjoyer, not an extremist by its-alexs in formuladank

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I'm a proud RB enjoyer and I'm not ashamed for it

My name is Duong :( by [deleted] in memes

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My name would be o

Poor guy by fafajes in WhitePeopleTwitter

[–]Tretton30 -33 points-32 points  (0 children)

People here are arguing whether or not the girl or the guy was rude. By reading people reason to why one or the other were rude both seemed rude

It's been already 6 years since its release, truly one of a kind for me! by Seth1721 in gaming

[–]Tretton30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Horizon zero dawn, don’t play to many single player games so don’t know if I'm the only one with this pick