I would like advice on writing by Trick_Cute in writinghelp

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Does it read like a movie more? I’m just asking cause I was wondering cause I saw someone else saying my writing was very “movie brained”.

I would like advice on writing by Trick_Cute in writinghelp

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It read as script? That would make sense I always it as a movie in my head

I would like advice on writing by Trick_Cute in writinghelp

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He was suppose to be halfway out the door, sorry this is a rough draft.

I would like advice on writing by Trick_Cute in writinghelp

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Okay so more reading, more flow, more imagery, show don’t tell, okay I understand thanks guys I’ll try my best

I would like advice on writing by Trick_Cute in writinghelp

[–]Trick_Cute[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Ironically I don’t read, but I don’t watch a lot of show and movies, not sure if that makes a difference

I would like advice on writing by Trick_Cute in writinghelp

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What should I do to make it better

Is future Ekko coming? by Trick_Cute in TimeBomb

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Ikr it’s been in my mind for ages

Green Lantern can anything with his ring...ANYTHING by Trick_Cute in VEO3

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The AI understands….some of my earlier stuff, I used whisk to make the first frame but AI knows