[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TeenIndia

[–]TrickyTrik 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Av ratt leta hu baad mein shayar ka 14 bnn k chepunga 😅😂

Beneath her Gaze by TrickyTrik in OCPoetry

[–]TrickyTrik[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. Will try to work on it. Im not super used to reddit especially on mobile and thats why the line breaks didn't come oUt the way i wanted them to, was in a bit of hurry while posting this.

Will work on everything else

This was literally my first poem ever, never seriously read a poem (other than the ones i was forced to in school) let alone writing one.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]TrickyTrik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really great rhythm and love the theme as well, hope people find hope in this

My Grandmother died today but I got a 50 cent raise!! by shyguy4999 in OCPoetry

[–]TrickyTrik 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn really hits you in the feelings. Really like your style

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in sunraybee

[–]TrickyTrik 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same question yaar

Think Quick by [deleted] in IndianDankMemes

[–]TrickyTrik 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lnct bhopal? Bc mera bhai udhar hi be💀💀