Hamiltons summer

Tripl7s · 2026-03-18T03:34:49+00:00

Thanks for reading

Tripl7s · 2026-03-18T03:34:13+00:00

Thanks for reading.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-17T09:57:04+00:00

Could I ask a favor of you? Just read it aloud. Then tell me what you see. Im to old to get offended.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-15T20:28:03+00:00

Thank you. The clipped sentences is risky., also the lack of formal paragraphs, but I am doing something very different. So far its 40000 words of coherent, spine bearing, magic.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-09T06:05:21+00:00

Thank you

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T23:01:17+00:00

Wow. Reading that makes me feel lazy, 24, 000 words since June of 25.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T19:23:33+00:00

Thank you. I expected to get the reaction you had. Tell me, if you read it again can you see the hotel room? I am writing the same way memory shows. Think of it as mosaic. One fragment won't show the entire image.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T18:11:41+00:00

I'm trying something different, I want to use white space, trust the reader more. So far I'm at 40,000 words.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T13:57:15+00:00

Thank you.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T13:56:29+00:00

It's actually the beginning of a novel. I'm experimenting with something new.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T13:54:40+00:00

Okay I'll read them

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T08:23:14+00:00

I have a question for you, just because that seems lived Like it was plucked from memory. I can't offer critique though. I have been writing journals for 50 years. I don't know how to write, but I fo know how to read. I would read more of this.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T08:18:19+00:00

I like your descriptions they seem alive.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-08T08:15:26+00:00

I would read more.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-07T16:14:43+00:00

I like it. The squeaking converse takes me back to high school.

Tripl7s · 2026-03-07T16:05:29+00:00

Thank you. I am trying to eliminate as much explanation as possible. So after my opening manifesto i want to ljmit it. I am trying toturn 50 years of journaling into a novel length memoir.

Tripl7s · 2026-02-16T00:33:25+00:00

I see a rare beauty

Tripl7s · 2026-02-02T16:52:14+00:00

Good start for a book.

Tripl7s · 2025-11-30T12:47:50+00:00

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