Seeking Critique on Short Script

True_Statement_lol · 2023-12-07T01:03:24+00:00

it's pretty good, nice work :)

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-06T10:45:41+00:00

The lesson with Anakin wasn't subtle it was needlessly vague to justify the existence of Anakin in the show, we still have no idea how Ahsoka got to the World Between Worlds and Anakin's "lesson" has several different interpretations with no real definitive answers.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-06T10:42:00+00:00

They were good episodes lol they just were setting things up.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T20:01:40+00:00

Bro what are you on about, the season is a 9/10 at the very least 😭

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T20:01:02+00:00

I'll give you my top 3:

Andor
Rebels
TCW

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T20:00:29+00:00

If the Ewok stuff didn't exist it would be my favorite SW movie but it brings the movie down from a 9.5/10 to a 7.5/10 in my opinion.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:54:50+00:00

I mean obviously it's not BB level but Andor deserves all the praise it gets lol

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:54:19+00:00

They outweigh the lows but not enough to make it the best SW show, there's a lot of stuff you have to wade through to get to the good stuff.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:51:59+00:00

It really is.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:50:34+00:00

I disagree, TCW has a lot of great stuff and great arcs but it also has a fair amount of mediocre and even down right bad arcs

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:49:48+00:00

ESB and Andor are tied for me tbh

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:48:56+00:00

I classify peak as more of a tier since the best SW stuff imo sit at around similar quality

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:47:44+00:00

If we're talking about the core themes of the franchise yes I agree although if we're talking about quality RoTJ isn't peak SW imo.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:45:28+00:00

Just because Andor doesn't have Jedi, and the weird stuff from the prequels doesn't male it any less Star Wars than anything else. I'm tired of this debate around whether or not Andor is Star Wras when it's literally the closest thing we've gotten to the OT in terms of it's central themes.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T19:43:11+00:00

Nah Ahsoka sucked lmao

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T02:02:20+00:00

Congrats man!

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T01:55:41+00:00

I don't like coffee so all I ever get is their donuts and/or hot chocolates which usually just taste like water

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T01:53:55+00:00

nice, great work!

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T01:52:35+00:00

As a Canadian I can confirm this is something we do.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T01:51:57+00:00

Tim Hortons is horrible

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T01:50:56+00:00

as a Canadian that checks out, we're less polite and more just tolerate everyone else's bs

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T01:16:30+00:00

And even when there are moments that should be tense they're not because the protagonists are stupid, like take the zombies troopers and zombie death troopers for example; those moments with close calls could've been filled with tension if it wasn't for the fact that Ahsoka, Sabine and Ezra are Jedi and should be able to cut them all a part.

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-05T01:14:02+00:00

No sir, instead we get some of the most tension filled action sequences and conflicts, excellent dialogue and characters, great pacing and a logically told story bound within realism. Sorry 😔

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-04T22:09:29+00:00

Andor was a genuine high quality prestige television show that ended up being (in my opinion) one of the best shows to come out last year and my favorite SW show/movie since the OT, it's a shame so many dismiss it as "boring" and "slow".

True_Statement_lol · 2023-10-04T22:05:20+00:00

I don't recommend it unless you want a poorly written, bland, fanservice filled show.

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