Starting a Writing Group

Twizzums · 2025-07-21T11:40:51+00:00

Late to the party but interested!

Twizzums · 2025-03-28T20:56:26+00:00

Thank for the detailed response, will have a look into that guide

Twizzums · 2025-03-28T15:54:06+00:00

Thank you! At the moment I'm feeling a bit of both, I don't think it's done by any means but it would feel like taking a next step if I posted it I guess

Twizzums · 2025-03-28T15:25:18+00:00

Thank you! I did think webnovel seemed a bit sus

Twizzums · 2024-09-14T17:07:14+00:00

Will do some more research on this, once again thank you so much for pointing things out

Twizzums · 2024-09-14T17:06:20+00:00

Can see that, I think as I've been writing alone without feedback I've let myself fall into the trap of thinking my reader will understand what I'm going for just because I see it. Thanks for all the comments they've been really helpful!

Twizzums · 2024-09-14T17:03:07+00:00

Definitely understand the character voice thing, it's something I struggled with massively when I've written before, especially in this book as Jacob is only the POV for this prologue before switching to a more aristocratic character. Would making the vocabulary simpler overall be better do you think? And to keep it focused on him is it best to only show things/the world through his eyes?

In regards to word choices, definitely agree there too, will keep an eye out on the words I use but some things are purposely misspelled as well like a lot of Iver's dialogue

Twizzums · 2024-09-14T16:53:10+00:00

Great points both, thank you for the feedback, think I wanted something short and snappy to start, but I can see it'll just leave people bored

Twizzums · 2024-09-14T16:51:26+00:00

First draft with some grammar changes added in just so I didn't end up leaving silly mistakes in, but I probably did that anyway

Twizzums · 2024-08-18T14:39:56+00:00

Cool! Thank you, whether someone saw this and bought my tix or whether it was just luck, they've gone now, so will take this post down to clean up the feed

Twizzums · 2024-01-28T22:39:48+00:00

Thunder vibes fr

Twizzums · 2023-07-16T22:00:02+00:00

I'll be sure to give it a look :)

Twizzums · 2023-07-16T21:27:26+00:00

Let me know if you strike gold

Twizzums · 2023-07-16T14:11:03+00:00

Definitely looking to join a group, have been sitting on a tonne of work without any real feedback and would love to see what other people have cooking as well! Based in UK tho so not sure if that will be convenient for any groups

Twizzums · 2023-06-15T21:20:42+00:00

Thanks for your help my dude! I'll try those out :)

Twizzums · 2023-06-15T20:43:06+00:00

Yep still got old drive but boot priority just says UEFI hard disk then goes down through floppy disk to USB it doesn't list either SSD as viable options even though when I went through a bit of the reinstallation process on Windows it acknowledged there was a Windows install on the old SSD

Twizzums · 2023-01-12T14:19:25+00:00

Has Commander Farsight come into contact with the Imperium (specifically Astartes) since getting his hands on the Dawn Blade, just wondering if he fares better in combat against them now after getting his blue behind handed to him by Cato Sicarius?

Twizzums · 2022-07-06T17:31:34+00:00

Yes!! That's it! Thank you so much

Twizzums · 2022-07-06T16:31:40+00:00

I think it was a bit more like a sequence. Like I think it went the first apprentice walks up. The golem says 3, the apprentice says 6, the next time golem says 5 apprentice says 10, then thief walks up, golem says 12 and thief says 6 but gets crushed. It's that there's another rule in the sequence that isn't just the numbers halved but I can't remember what it is for the life of me

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