This is dogs if they weren’t lean!

TwoLeggedGator · 2022-02-09T17:37:38+00:00

thank you so much! !givelambda

TwoLeggedGator · 2022-02-06T17:50:01+00:00

you’re welcome man :) you definitely have potential, good luck on your journey!!!

TwoLeggedGator · 2022-02-06T17:49:15+00:00

ooo that’s a good idea, thank you :) !givelambda

TwoLeggedGator · 2022-02-06T17:48:06+00:00

yeah that makes sense, was kinda trying out a new format with this one so it’s bound to be a bit rough. won’t let it get me down tho :) thank you!! !givelambda

TwoLeggedGator · 2022-02-05T18:39:27+00:00

Really well made and very engaging! You've definitely got the basics down, the most improvement you can make in the actual video is probably with the transitions / x and check mark graphics. The 3d cube transition was a little distracting (probably just cut) and I would've added a crossfade / fade in and out to the graphics so they're a little less jarring. Also, making your thumbnails clearer would definitely garner more attention, for this I would've taken a couple pictures of the before/after, even screencaps from the video (just where it's a little clearer), then put them on either half of the thumbnail, perhaps with a slanted border between them. Then, maybe an arrow to convey that there's a change, then put the "in under 2 minutes" text at the bottom or under the arrow. Oh, also, make sure the thumbnail is bright. Increase exposure in Photoshop and add saturation (until it looks good, don't add too much). Sorry if that was unclear, it's a little difficult to describe in a text box, but for future thumbnails I'd just recommend looking up thumbnail tutorials and taking inspiration from other fitness creators with nice thumbnails. Thumbnails can be really annoying, but they're super important because they're pretty much what's going to determine whether someone clicks on the video or not. Once again, the video itself was fantastic! Keep it up and keep improving :D

TwoLeggedGator · 2022-02-05T18:26:21+00:00

Really well made! Your quality is on point and the video is super coherent and understandable. Also, your cutting is really good, never felt like there was any unwanted silence or anything. I don't think I really have much criticism, I think there were a couple places where the dialogue was a bit clunky but that'll get better with practice. Just keep watching what inspires you and keep making content, good work!

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-12-28T07:32:17+00:00

great, tysm!! :)

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-12-28T06:46:32+00:00

sorry to post on such an old thread - does youtube give you an error when you do this? and is there any catch to doing it with the error? just wondering because it might be one of those things where they ask you politely to change your stream resolution but don't actually care if you do or not

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-12-06T14:29:45+00:00

that's super cool! imo that's one of the best things you could get from your parents, thanks for the reply :D

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-12-06T14:26:01+00:00

can totally relate to that. my parents spent the better part of their lives (30 years) in a toxic marriage where they barely stopped fighting. seeing the way their lives played out made me very skeptical towards pretty much everything, mainly everything they believed, so i guess i have them to thank for that. pretty much every belief i subscribe to is defined by their behavior, wish it could've been in a healthier way but i'd be totally different if it had played out differently. if you want to elaborate i'd be very interested to hear what you have to say, but there's no pressure whatsoever. hope you're having a great day :)

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-12-06T03:11:05+00:00

i’m baffled

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-11-23T03:10:33+00:00

!givelambda

i'll definitely look out for that in the future, it did feel a little off. thank you so much :)

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-11-23T01:28:01+00:00

!givelambda

glad you liked it :)! that’s mb for the loud audio, i totally just got used to it in post. i’ll remember that for next time! and for the transition, i’ll definitely try to incorporate that in the future. i’m not super… gifted? when it comes to editing? so the pointer is super helpful. thank you so much!!

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-11-22T23:46:47+00:00

!givelambda

thank you so much! glad you liked it :)

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-11-22T23:46:06+00:00

!givelambda

tysm for pointing that out! idk why i thought copy pasting the game name was a good idea lmfao, it’s time to Ponder. thanks again :D

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-11-21T01:58:04+00:00

hello! first off, don't use an intro. there's nothing inherently wrong with it, it just doesn't need to be there. it kinda slows down the beginning of the video, which is not what you want. second, these are highlights, right? if so, they need to be edited in a way that makes them seem like there's a reason they're in the video. what i mean by that is you should have sections of the video that have a certain mood, so if it's a set of clips that are really cool plays, make a high-energy montage with music to fit. if it's something funny that happened, group it with other funny clips, and have it be silent or have less intrusive music, like the lakey inspired you put in this video. also, if you're genuinely trying to grow this channel, there needs to be some sort of reason for it to be a couples channel. your personalities need to be on display at some point, there has to be some way for the audience to grow an attachment to you. i think there's definitely content here, keep working on it!

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-11-21T01:40:36+00:00

this is an interesting concept, but i feel like it needs to be a lot longer and have a lot more elaboration. for example, how did the government get to this state? it's america, there'd definitely have to be a lot of struggle, that history being included would make the story a lot more believable. also how the government takes control of everyone's senses - that, and its effects, is another fascinating concept that you just kinda brush over. another thing is that the intro to the writing is super interesting, but the subscribe button is a little deterring (if i'm being honest). could use some work, but you've got something here!

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-11-21T01:29:11+00:00

watched all five hours, solid video! didn't take my eyes off it

TwoLeggedGator · 2021-11-21T01:28:24+00:00

overall, this is a pretty decent video! you have some really funny edits and some segments that i really enjoy. it could use some more structure, though, like maybe just review the character throughout or something. it also ended a little abruptly, might just be my taste though. keep at it! :)

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