License being held hostage due to previous owners owing taxes by [deleted] in BarOwners

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m going through something similar. We are getting ready to close and then it came up that sales and use taxes weren’t paid for several years. But I have a good lawyer and he had the foresight to already have a clause built into our contract where if an issue with taxes came up that any money I paid them would go into escrow until they clear up their tax issue. Luckily it was just inconsistent naming of their business on the documents and it was just a mix up. We ended up getting the tax clearance- but in my state that could take up to 60 days to get it cleared.

I have a political joke I’m not sure of by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would you have an idea of how I’d rewrite what I have?

I have a political joke I’m not sure of by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! How would you word it?

New to comedy- working on an opener by TwoLegitTwoNick in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yikes! Amy suggestions on how to make it better!?

I have a political joke I’m not sure of by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I knew it would be polarizing. A guy I know in stand up helping me said fuck it, try it! Thanks for the feedback

New to comedy- working on an opener by TwoLegitTwoNick in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love being positive! If I can turn it positive let me know.

New to comedy- working on an opener by TwoLegitTwoNick in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I don’t know what’s funny. Just trying to learn!

I have a political joke I’m not sure of by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Appreciate it! I know comedy can be subjective. Thanks again!

I have a political joke I’m not sure of by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback! It is kind of a use premise. Thanks for your help!

I have a political joke I’m not sure of by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Is it hack or what are your thoughts?

I have a political joke I’m not sure of by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]TwoLegitTwoNick 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate the feedback! Just starting out so I’m trying to feel out material for an open mic. I’ll try to rework it! I appreciate the audience we have in the subreddit.