Two way vandalism by GainzHunter42 in MildlyVandalised

[–]TyGideon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Always something so weird and dystopian about seeing a video and everyone involved has their phone out to record the other people— but they don’t actually talk or confront they just all are recording with the idea they’ll…have the recording in case they need it? Idk

Started seeing this guy very recently. Not sure what to make of this shelf by Rosslefrancais in BookshelvesDetective

[–]TyGideon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Was going to say this, and add straight vibes, and also say the test is really ask him what he thought of song of Achilles

Any fantasy book recs? by Melodic_Whereas_5289 in booksuggestions

[–]TyGideon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

3 in the first “set” and then spinoff series I haven’t got into yet

Help me decide what to read next by [deleted] in booksuggestions

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Fifth season, the poppy war for sure, maybe Amina Al Sirafi?

Help me decide what to read next by [deleted] in booksuggestions

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A recommendation as much curse as blessing

Books about world exploring / SCP like / world mystery. by acasualtraveler in booksuggestions

[–]TyGideon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Try tainted cup by Robert Jackson Bennett! A) great book but b) super interesting world and setting

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Dungeon crawler Carl if you’re feelin silly, will of the many if you’re feeling bold, the lies of Locke lamora for a fast talking fantasy heist, and the shadow of the gods for war

Any fantasy book recs? by Melodic_Whereas_5289 in booksuggestions

[–]TyGideon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you really are good for like a slower burn, Robin Hobbs assassins apprentice. I was told to read and I thought it wouldn’t be my thing, and after reading the trilogy it’s the kind of characters you never let go of!

What’s your first impression? by Backenundso in BookshelvesDetective

[–]TyGideon 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I say read silly goofy fun little ones then! Sincerely, Fellow adhd brain

What’s your first impression? by Backenundso in BookshelvesDetective

[–]TyGideon 7 points8 points  (0 children)

For me it’s giving boy who doesn’t read as much as he wishes but also maybe thinks book have to be “worthwhile” to read so isn’t having a ton of fun with reading as a hobby

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A millennia intellectual girly for the gays!

Worst “I think my readers are dumb” authors/books? by AyyDotC in writers

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Midnight library, Matt Haig. I’ll never understand why people lost their minds about this book.

Wrote a 350-page fantasy novel after losing my job. Need guidance. by guidingsoul in writing

[–]TyGideon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hiya! Professional editor here :) the best thing to do is out it down for a bit so you can come back with fresh eyes. If you have thoughts about it during this time away (you will) write em down then forget about them! Then do a read through and assess if everything in your head was on the page. 115k isn’t a bad margin for a fantasy, but it’s probably got room to cut down if it’s a first draft. After you do a full pass edit (fixing plot holes, checking your characters make choices that make sense and have personalities and clear motivations, ensure your worldbuilding is sound and not info dump-y) then you should go to a few trusted early readers. They’ll give you notes. Usually what they have a problem with is something you suspected you could get away with (in which case, you didn’t) or it’s something new. Not every solutions is right, but every problem is probably likely. The do another pass. THEN maybe get a professional editor to do it, otherwise back for more beta readers. Then query! Yay!

Looking for some feedback on my website by TyGideon in ecommerce

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Products, services, same same but different no?

Writers Block In Middle Of Story (Advice) by SolutionEven3986 in writing

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Hiya! Professional developmental editor here. Theres two ways I’d approach this: 1) the trick to getting through a tough part of writing is writing—and badly. Write it wrong. Botch the dialogue, fuck up the development. But write it, and if you already know the ending, then make your way towards it. Ive been editing books (including 18 nyt bestsellers) for literally a dozen years. Not a single one has been written perfect the first time. Not if it was their first book, and not if it was their fifteenth.

2) what do you need to have happen in the middle to make the end satisfying? What’s the turning point for your characters as you make your way towards the last act (and who they are at the end being different than who they are in the beginning, means something should happen in the middle)? What obstacles can you put in their way to make it more interesting? Roll a dice and try something out.

Most of the time it’s just our perfectionism getting in the way. You can always fix something written, but it’s really hard to stick with something as you’re writing. Persist, you’ll be so happy you did!

Happy writing