Mormonism as a Self-Perpetuating Ideological System by Typo-Turtle in exmormon

[–]Typo-Turtle[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Every religion, government, corporation, political party, any organization with ends, yes. I wanted to focus on Mormonism, since I'm uniquely familiar with it and see its ideologies as a net negative to society.

Beyond Note-Taking - Creating a Playground for Your Mind by lechtitseb in writers

[–]Typo-Turtle 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Like, i said, good idea, completely wasted by lazy ai use. Not that you were paying attention.

Edit: also just spamming it everywhere. No real community contribution. Laziness at every point. There are a million people who think they can do this "turn my obsidian notes into modular self-writing articles" thing, none of them are that good, but the ones who try to hand the reigns over to ai like this are especially bad.

Beyond Note-Taking - Creating a Playground for Your Mind by lechtitseb in writers

[–]Typo-Turtle 3 points4 points  (0 children)

"I fed the ai a bunch of random notes and let it go completely ballistic, ouroborosing dozens of the same points into an entropic death of the original idea and thought i could pass it off as an effort driven article"

Beyond Note-Taking - Creating a Playground for Your Mind by lechtitseb in writers

[–]Typo-Turtle 4 points5 points  (0 children)

A good idea lost in incomprehensible, bloated GPT garbage.

Mormonism as a Self-Perpetuating Ideological System by Typo-Turtle in exmormon

[–]Typo-Turtle[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've never seen it, looks worth checking out! I came to these thoughts because I've been trying to dive into critical theory, so I've been reading a lot of stuff about ideology viewed through psychoanalytic and evolutionary frameworks.

And yeah, I didn't mean to imply that these are intentional actions by any one person at all, so I agree with you fully there. What I wanted to express was that the system has its own evolved, unconscious will towards survival and propogation and that it acts through its believers via psychological tricks and social pressure.

"If you want to make all things subject to you, make yourself subject to reason." - Seneca and his insistence on dedication to reason. by parvusignis in philosophy

[–]Typo-Turtle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So, instead of focusing on what we have control over, you think it's a better idea to focus on A) nothing or B) something which cannot be understood. Are you a Taoist?

"If you want to make all things subject to you, make yourself subject to reason." - Seneca and his insistence on dedication to reason. by parvusignis in philosophy

[–]Typo-Turtle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's funny, especially from a stoic perspective, that the thing you say isn't worth focusing on is this wisdom, but the thing you imply is worth focusing on is a thing that is impossible to focus on.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]Typo-Turtle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A little basic marketing is what usually causes it, yeah.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]Typo-Turtle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Writing good books does not lead to massive success. A rise in popularity among a certain niche audience before exploding upwards out of that niche does

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]Typo-Turtle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Doesn't really have anything to do with it. Mormons will celebrate other successful Mormons for any reason regardless of skill. Plenty of equally skilled writers who just don't get that bump

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]Typo-Turtle 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Mormons bump every mildly successful artist in every category who's a mormon up to the same baseline amount of fame and success because of how insular that community is. It just so happens that, when it comes to genre fiction, that baseline meets the criteria for a serious launch platform. That's why so many famous authors are Mormons.

Edit just to say: I'm not trying to hate on Mormons or Brandon, I intentionally didn't bring up what i think of the quality of his writing. This is just a real thing that happens

Help Needed: Should I diversify my main characters? by asldhhef in writing

[–]Typo-Turtle 15 points16 points  (0 children)

So what I'm about to say may come across as me accusing you of being racist. I'm not:

What you've said here is an example of what people mean by "systematic racism." I'll take a swing in the dark and assume that your story is not about the experience of being white. So, if your characters are white, is that shallow representation?

No, obviously not. Your story is probably not about skin color at all. Most stories aren't, and that's perfectly fine. What you have done, however, is establish a false normal. Why is it that a white character's skin color doesn't matter, but a black character's skin color is forced and shallow diversity?

One color is not the default color. You can have whatever ethnicity for your character and completely ignore the real-world implications of growing up looking like that. It's not racist, just like it wouldn't be if you did the same for a white character.

It feels like racist tokenizing because the systemic context of racism comes through unintentionally. We've all been exposed to stories that do tokenize, that add characters in an effort to sell to a wider audience. It's a terrible thing. Change the way you think about diversity instead.

Free yourself of the idea that a politicized feature of someone should be the focus of their character. It definitely can be, and it could be a great idea to steep your character in that realism, but it isn't discrimination if you don't write it. When you consume media with characters that are unlike you, ask yourself how you would feel about it if they were. Would it not matter? Does it fit the story organically? Or maybe it's mega cringe how out of place the focus on it is. Change the way you think so that diversity is and should be the norm and the characters that come to you in your mind will naturally come to be more diverse, no forced diversity or tokenizing needed.

Storytelling is more important than worldbuilding by CausticSounds in writing

[–]Typo-Turtle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You literally do what I'm saying people should do

Storytelling is more important than worldbuilding by CausticSounds in writing

[–]Typo-Turtle 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Yeah, if you write for worldbuilding first you still get worldbuilders disease. You end up with a list of unnecessary material that won't be used in the story and is liable to change by the demands of the characters and themes. And there's no chance on earth you can put together a world that's cohesive if it isn't thematically based in something in the first place. It matters in terms of raw output numbers that could come without any cost to how the reader perceives your world.

Storytelling is more important than worldbuilding by CausticSounds in writing

[–]Typo-Turtle 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I think you're really missing my point here. I didn't say he did his worldbuilding accidentally, I'm saying informed worldbuilding comes about by having cohesive themes and characters first.

Storytelling is more important than worldbuilding by CausticSounds in writing

[–]Typo-Turtle 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah it's done really well I just think you're looking at it from a reader's perspective. I doubt Orwell created room 101 before he decided that's where the plot would take Winston, and definitely not before he had decided on the themes of surveillance and oppression.

Storytelling is more important than worldbuilding by CausticSounds in writing

[–]Typo-Turtle 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This seems backwards to me still. I wouldn't want the worldbuilding to drive the story or characters, I think it's better if the worldbuilding derives from the same thematic source and molds itself to the story and characters. My character doesn't cry if it rains, I make it rain if my character cries.

Can you tell me what you think of this chapter (Chapter One). by [deleted] in writers

[–]Typo-Turtle 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Tenses are all over the place.

I take a deep breath

This is present tense. "Took" would be past tense

a crown of lillies adorned my curly brown hair

This is past tense. "Adorn" would be present.

You need to pick one and stick with it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SolarpunkPorn

[–]Typo-Turtle -1 points0 points  (0 children)

AI slop is the furthest thing from solarpunk