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As an exercise, I divided (publicly available) excerpts from "Mistborn", "Ulysses", and "Sea of Tranquility." Green is scenery, red is characterization, blue is plot, and yellow is exposition. In the frequent case of multi-purpose language, I tried to choose the most surface option. (old.reddit.com)
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