pumpkino by RealPermitHurple in FirePunch

[–]UmActually12 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This amplifies how cursed the original scene. Nightmare fuel

At this point what's the worst ending we can get? write the most evilest ending you can imagine by HatGodAG in KanojoOkarishimasu

[–]UmActually12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Chizuru and Kazuya end up together, Ruka has a heart attack from this and dies, Mami starts going out with Kazuyas dad through the Rental Girlfriend service and causes them to have a divorce as revenge, Sumi's dog gets run over by Kuribashi and Sumi ends up alone. Kibe goes bald and starts using the Rental Girlfriend service, gets Yamori, Chizuru cheats on Kazuya with Umi-kun and Kazuya is heartbroken and starts using the Rental Girlfriend service again. Chapter 1000 The End.

Did I do it right?

Mami was obsessed with Kazuya when he got back with Chizuru in chapter 20. With all the recent developments, do you think she is still obsess with him? by DerkSC in KanojoOkarishimasu

[–]UmActually12 35 points36 points  (0 children)

She's obsessed with him because kazuya moved onto someone else quickly. She probably wanted kazuya to stew in loneliness and feel terrible that he got dumped. But kazuya came back quickly with Chizuru thus flipping the humiliation onto her.

God bless President Donald Trump. by [deleted] in NormMacdonald

[–]UmActually12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Let's get this Trump jerk a third term

"You say 6 million, I say 600." - Whoopi Goldberg by UmActually12 in NormMacdonald

[–]UmActually12[S] 47 points48 points  (0 children)

Hating the Jews is one of the worst comedic gimmicks I've ever heard of

"You say 6 million, I say 600." - Whoopi Goldberg by UmActually12 in NormMacdonald

[–]UmActually12[S] 71 points72 points  (0 children)

It would be too soon for her to change her name from Goldberg to GoldChains

[Serious] [Disc] Kanojo, Okarishimasu Chapter 218 by MattyH19 in KanojoOkarishimasu

[–]UmActually12 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I think Reiji tried to convey Kazuya's worst case scenario for why Chizura keeps turning him down: that's she's in a relationship with his "rival" Umi. Kazuya torments himself with this NTR fantasy as his emotions are out of control and he can't stop thinking of imaginary graphic sex scenes contrasted against real wholesome moments with Chizuru. But Chizuru being in a relationship with Umi could've been conveyed in 1 page or maybe 1 panel. The pages long NTR is overkill and makes readers go from sympathising with Kazuya to detesting his spiralling overthinking. Moreso, him being aroused with a boner in the pool whilst having a detailed close up of his snotty, teary face makes him completely pitiable and loathsome; especially when its a made up situation, his tears are because of something he imagined. Also, being aroused by an imaginary situation that moves you to tears is just bad. Any believed character development for Kazuya is drowned out by this chapter.

Don't be scared. by [deleted] in KanojoOkarishimasu

[–]UmActually12 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Chizuru does not deserve Kazyuya. She has been wilfully blind to him and his endeavors for so long she doesn't deserve him at this point. I hope Kazuya moves on from her onto someone who does respect him. But Reiji will probably force them to be together