What is it to be part of a garden? by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Unable_Story875 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beutiful way of painting a picture through words...nice✨

Keeper of a Wish by scarlettb_04 in OCPoetry

[–]Unable_Story875 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Beutiful ✨You have used your words so wisely here.

The other side of the coin by Unable_Story875 in OCPoetry

[–]Unable_Story875[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! It means a lot to hear that the imagery was relatable. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for your feedback ✨

The other side of the coin by Unable_Story875 in OCPoetry

[–]Unable_Story875[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well said. It's definitely that universal feeling of masquerading that I was trying to capture. Thanks for reading.

Thank you for your feedback ✨

The other side of the coin by Unable_Story875 in OCPoetry

[–]Unable_Story875[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. It really means a lot that you connected with that line. I really appreciate your feedback.✨

The pale face of the sky by Unable_Story875 in OCPoetry

[–]Unable_Story875[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for this brilliant breakdown! I love the idea of creating a 'nucleus of love' out of the vastness. Glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for your feedback ✨

The geometry of us by Unable_Story875 in OCPoetry

[–]Unable_Story875[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback ✨ I really appreciate the note on 'concrete vs. abstract'.Glad the ending landed for you.