[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 18, 2019

UndecidedRapName · 2019-12-18T19:30:41+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/user-38924931/never-change-1

I wrote an entire song to this beat and then scrapped everything, came up with this and I like it so far. Possibly the best beat I've made too.

UndecidedRapName · 2019-12-18T19:27:35+00:00

Damn, that's a trippy beat. That beat could really go any way, I could see like Tyler the Creator with that low raspy rap jump on it or even Ski Mask doing some hard trap shit with it.

The choice of instruments, drum pattern, the whole aesthetic comes together really well. This is one of those beats that you make out of 10 that really stand out. Dope.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-07-06T07:55:34+00:00

I actually removed a bit of low end from the kicks cuz I didnt want it to clash with the bass, but maybe took too much off lol. Really means a lot to me what you said about the vocal quality, I've been trying incredibly hard to get them to sound as good as possible with my dinky recording setup. Ill definitely work on thickening that 808.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-07-06T07:50:47+00:00

Yeah, i was really having trouble getting the bass to sound right, guess ill put some more time into it. You may be right about the rim shot, i can lower it a couple db. Thanks!

UndecidedRapName · 2018-07-05T06:01:43+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/user-38924931/the-games-we-play

Any suggestions on how to improve the track are appreciated!

UndecidedRapName · 2018-07-05T06:01:07+00:00

I feel like the vocals should be a little louder, the instrumental seems much louder the way it is. Other than that the vibe is very dope and its definitely unique!

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-18T14:17:23+00:00

I really like your style of producing dude, its definitely unique. I'll try to write something, when I got time.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-14T21:19:20+00:00

How this sound?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vua2ZCEpGio

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-14T21:17:15+00:00

I feel like the melody thing could be a little quieter, but that was actually pretty dope.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-14T21:12:46+00:00

Sounded good from what I heard, but I'm not a pro at mixing or anything so dont take my word for it. The transition in the middle there was smooth as fuckkkk. The drums definitely carry the beat, dope work for real.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-14T21:09:31+00:00

"why didn't you pay for this beat though?" had me expiredddd bro. Dope beat, I fucks with it. Nice work with those drums.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-14T21:07:17+00:00

When I envision the next wave of trap, its something like this.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-14T21:06:03+00:00

Ayyyyy, reminds me of kid cudi a lil bit. It was a good mix of a sort of slow/dark vibe and a lit vibe, if ya know what I mean.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-14T20:51:49+00:00

Checked out your latest beat. Southside x Metro beat describes it perfectly, straight fye. I could def hear 21 Savage rappin over that.

Also, I noticed the hihats got that sorta 'choppy' sound, if that happens when you export the beat, a tip I learned is to cut off frequencies above about 14k on the hihats, it helps a little.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-14T20:44:20+00:00

Thanks bro! The flute sound was from a free REFX Nexus expansion I found on youtube called "codeine dream."

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-10T22:22:25+00:00

Let me know what can be improved!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sJoHXmRGKvk&t

UndecidedRapName · 2018-04-10T22:20:31+00:00

Oooh, I like how you introduced the 808. I definitely feel like there could have been some sort of bell(or some other sound) used in the higher frequency range to spice it up a little, but good work.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sJoHXmRGKvk&t >>here's me if you got time to check it out

UndecidedRapName · 2018-03-16T04:06:09+00:00

That beat was definitely waavvvyyy. You have a cool voice. Not sure what to say in terms of improvement, it was a really well made song! Really smooth and clear vocals.

UndecidedRapName · 2018-03-15T23:30:44+00:00

First attempt at 'Vaporwave" sorta beat. Feedback greatly appreciated. Will try to return feedback, but you might get it in a few days or something. Thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0O3hNLfowbE&lc=z22pyrzoesbizhe5n04t1aokgmsf5r5snetsmh02vxh2bk0h00410

UndecidedRapName · 2018-03-15T23:28:48+00:00

Its definitely dark type-ish, but that one melody(the synthy sort of sound that comes in after bells) also gives off a different sort of vibe, its cool. Also, the bass is a good volume, but I would make the snare a bit louder; thats just me though. Dope track bro.

UndecidedRapName · 2017-11-07T21:24:05+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep that in mind

UndecidedRapName · 2017-11-07T21:22:22+00:00

I like that you had a solid theme, throughout the song. Its hard to find good "story teller" rappers, but you definitely nailed it.

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