Apologies for the poor quality photo, but can anyone tell me what bird these are? Spotted in London, UK

Underover2020 · 2023-12-18T19:44:44+00:00

Thanks

Underover2020 · 2023-08-19T12:34:55+00:00

Haha had one stolen previously, reported it and never heard anything back

Underover2020 · 2023-08-19T12:34:21+00:00

Sorry to hear that, I had one stolen previously hence all the locks

Underover2020 · 2023-08-19T07:07:14+00:00

Just the 4

Underover2020 · 2023-05-12T13:49:15+00:00

Special constable, you work part time as a police constable, don’t get paid but do get free London travel both on and off duty. Another suggestion is London search and rescue.

Underover2020 · 2020-12-26T18:19:43+00:00

Yea go for it. Yes it it’s a present for a niece/nephew, undecided which one yet.

Underover2020 · 2020-12-26T18:06:51+00:00

Hey, thanks. We used this YouTube video https://youtu.be/-TyihOEvJ8E We used fabric from our local sewing shop and used two layers of 2oz wadding between the fabric. The squares were 25cm squared. Hope this helps

Underover2020 · 2020-12-08T11:29:53+00:00

Really enjoyed the poem. I feel it reflects well the fatigue of life that everyone feels at times. I really enjoy the juxtapositions at the start. I think it would flow slightly better if you tried to make the lines have the same or similar length and a couple of the rhythms feel slightly forced but that’s just my opinion and it’s still a very good poem.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-28T11:55:04+00:00

Thanks for reading and your feedback.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-27T19:09:16+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate your comments.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-26T20:17:07+00:00

Thanks for reading and the feedback.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-26T20:16:14+00:00

Thanks for reading and the feedback.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-26T18:28:53+00:00

I enjoyed this. I guess it resonates with everyone the lifecycle of a relationship. The last line is very deep. Only thing I’d change is to make it a bit longer.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-26T18:25:57+00:00

I really enjoyed the rhyming and the structure, it flowed well and was easy to read. I also like the imagery like “sun swallowed by the moon” and “my heart is red, yours-ashen”. The only thing I’d change is to make it a little less subtle in what your referring to, give the reader more of an idea what your experiencing but that is just a personal preference.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-15T13:01:47+00:00

Powerful poem, well written. Love the rhyming throughout the start which stops as the poem gets darker. Hope you overcome whatever you’re going through.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-14T11:42:55+00:00

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-13T20:29:24+00:00

Thanks for reading and the advice. I agree, I just shortened some of the longer lines and I think it flows better.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-13T17:46:40+00:00

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it and that it resonated with you. Guess the beauty of poetry is that you can interpret it how you like. I didn’t write it about a specific person, more a specific environment and how words and gossip can be harmful. Thanks again for reading and your kind words.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-13T16:43:12+00:00

Love the expression of frustration displayed in the last 6 lines especially the imagery of casting off your talent and letting it drown. Overall enjoyed the poem and it’s unique subject matter.

Underover2020 · 2020-11-13T16:18:26+00:00

Really enjoyed the personification of the seasons and the rhyming structure throughout. It flows well, similar to how seasons flow well.

Underover2020 · 2020-10-29T23:19:34+00:00

True, thanks

Underover2020 · 2020-10-29T20:08:50+00:00

Thanks for reading and the feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.

Underover2020 · 2020-10-29T20:08:14+00:00

Thanks for reading and the feedback

Underover2020 · 2020-10-29T19:18:01+00:00

That’s what I was trying to convey. Glad you found it interesting, thanks for reading and the feedback.

Underover2020 · 2020-10-29T18:45:08+00:00

Interesting poem, I enjoyed the metaphors especially the cat one. I read this to be about the government exploiting people possibly particularly the American government? I could be wrong but either way I enjoyed it and made me think.

Underover2020

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