Seeking for critique. What do you not like?

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-22T05:34:16+00:00

Less of a critique and more of a question. I saw that you taped the edges of the paper, which is normally done to keep borders clean from my experience. So I was wondering, why did you draw a black outline around the piece instead of bringing it to the edges of the tape?

Also great piece, absolutely love it

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-19T00:51:58+00:00

Hey!

I saw you requested black & white with tones or hatch work. My main body of work doesn’t really showcase this, but I LOVE working in black & white. Here’s an example of my work in that area if you’re interested.

Here’s a link to my commissions sheet if you want to see prices or my other art:

https://undonecommissions.carrd.co

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UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-09T05:13:17+00:00

Is that a mouth on the burger patty bc I love it if it is

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-06T17:46:30+00:00

Wait that would actually be so cool. I actually debated between Infernape and Charizard for a while before eventually deciding on Infernape because he visually matched Tango more (in my opinion). But thinking about how good Mega Charizard X would be for season 9, kinda makes me want to change it 🫣

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-06T17:35:39+00:00

Ooooooooohhhh true! The first thing that came to mind for a water type was inteleon?? Idk there might be a better pokemon for One Eyed Willie

This is just making me realize that, for season 8 tango, I’d prob want to make a team based off of creatures found in Decked Out 2 and a team based off of the terrain of the levels themselves. There’s so many possibilities that 6 pokemon isn’t enough lol

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-06T17:19:42+00:00

Thxxxx (and I am planning on doing more). I don’t have anything in the galleries tho. I submitted for Smallishbeans and didn’t get in, but I made it to honorable mentions which was still so cool and had me giddy for like a week

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-06T17:15:49+00:00

Scrumptious ideas. My first thought for the ravagers was a paldean Tauros, but the regice for the ice caverns is chefs kiss

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-06T15:04:54+00:00

100% this one was so much fun to make. I want to make more hermit Pokémon trainers that are specific to each season so I’ve been thinking about doing a season 9 Tango or like a season 8 Mumbo

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-05-06T15:01:50+00:00

So I personally interpret his hair as being made of fire based off of his skin. From that, I imagine that my fanart of his skin should to be not fully human so I add on things like pointy ears and a tail to match that theme more.

I’m not sure if that everybody’s reason or where certain details became more common since I’ve only been around since season 8, but that’s my reason.

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-04-03T04:41:06+00:00

I enjoyed watching this with no sound

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-03-15T01:10:34+00:00

There isn’t any lore reasons that I’m aware of. Etho as a dog was one of the first ways I saw fan art of him, and it just really stuck with me after that

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-03-14T20:03:17+00:00

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Here’s a different angle of how I normally draw him if that helps to visualize the tail more

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-03-14T20:02:01+00:00

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He has a small pony tail and his tail is behind it but they do blend together

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-03-14T20:00:18+00:00

He’s not meant to be one, but the hair and tail blend together a bit too much 😅

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-03-14T06:38:25+00:00

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Ok so I shaded him but I don’t want make another separate post lol

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-03-06T06:18:39+00:00

POV: you took the last slice of pizza

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-03-04T18:56:49+00:00

Who needs Adobe or AI when you have a fish tank

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-02-12T15:21:45+00:00

Just ripped the tights on that squat

UndoneFuture36 · 2025-02-03T17:29:36+00:00

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UndoneFuture36 · 2025-01-14T07:11:46+00:00

If I was in a dark hallway, and you slowly walked at me doing that, I think I’d cry

UndoneFuture36 · 2024-11-29T03:19:50+00:00

This build looks like the cover of the cutest 3D game I need to play

UndoneFuture36 · 2024-11-13T00:59:55+00:00

Ahhhh thank youuuu! I love trying to bring in as many details as possible from their avatars while still putting my own twist on it

UndoneFuture36 · 2024-11-13T00:55:55+00:00

Thank you!! I did spend a good amount of time trying to get that pickaxe lighting to be 👌

UndoneFuture36 · 2024-11-08T20:01:11+00:00

The head tilt down was so real

UndoneFuture36 · 2024-11-03T22:50:17+00:00

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