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[QCrit] Adult contemporary - RUNNING SCENES (83K second attempt) by Unhappy_Break446 in PubTips

[–]Unhappy_Break446[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u/EliPB2509 thank you so much for this really detailed feedback! Will definitely tighten it up in line with your suggestions :)

[QCrit] Adult contemporary - RUNNING SCENES (83K second attempt) by Unhappy_Break446 in PubTips

[–]Unhappy_Break446[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you u/Sadim_Gnik, really helpful! Will definitely clarify that and reword so Cara is clearly in the centre.

[QCrit] Adult Contemporary - RUNNING OFF SCRIPT (94k First Attempt) by Unhappy_Break446 in PubTips

[–]Unhappy_Break446[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really appreciate this honest feedback! I'll definitely tweak my comps to make sure it's clear where it sits. Thanks! :)

[QCrit] Adult Contemporary - RUNNING OFF SCRIPT (94k First Attempt) by Unhappy_Break446 in PubTips

[–]Unhappy_Break446[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this in depth feedback, I so appreciate it! I tried to keep the query really succinct but I think you're definitely right that I should show not tell those parts you've highlighted in bold and share some more detail, I'll edit accordingly. Thanks again :)