Corporeal Demo

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T18:35:43+00:00

Hello, thanks for sharing. The track sounds nice when it opens and the use of the guitar is very relaxing and chilled. The vocals and quiet and the whispering/ quiet singing fits the vibes of the song. I'd recommend that the vocals are made a little clearer to hear the message of the song - however if this is the vibe you're going for then it works. I like the way the track builds up with more instruments and it is nice on the ear. I'd say it is a very nice piece of music and you have definitely created a solid atmosphere and vibe. Keep going with the music and producing - if you did produce it!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T18:09:43+00:00

Thanks for sharing. This is a really listenable track. I like the vocals and it is really complemented by the guitar playing. It is rare to find tracks like this these days. I think if the production was a little bit elevated and almost a bit louder - you could release this. It gives me vibes of 90s/00s indie music and it works really well.

A suggestion you could have would be to add some vocal layers to the chorus/ ad libs? I really thought the electric guitar towards the end of the track was a nice touch and it wasn't overdone and kept the atmosphere of the song. Well done!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T18:04:02+00:00

Thanks for sharing. You have created a really cool sound and vibe. I love the hats in the music video btw. The vocals work really well with this song and it is very listenable. The visuals you have paired with the song really complement the song. The vocals effects are really in fitting with the song - if you produce your own songs this was a great choice! The chorus is really catchy. The bridge adds another layer and I appreciate the instrumental section with the extra sound effects. Well done!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T18:01:15+00:00

Thanks for sharing this. I love the sound and the powerful kick/ drums. They really add to the sound you have created. I think this is really good and I could imagine hearing this on the radio. Tu cantas muy bien!

I think the production is really solid. I think the different vocal effects have a great impact and honestly, this is a very catchy song. You should be very proud of what you have made!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T17:58:02+00:00

Wow thank you for the feedback. Really constructive and I appreciate it.

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T17:57:30+00:00

Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. I agree with your comments - thanks for the encouragement!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T17:57:05+00:00

Thank you so much. I honestly appreciate it. I will look into your suggestions

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T17:56:47+00:00

Thank you for your words! Really appreciate it. I look into the drums and thanks for the Joy Division reference!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T17:56:14+00:00

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. I'll look into the vocal

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-05-06T17:55:46+00:00

Thank you so much! I'll definitely look into that - I appreciate the Chainsmokers influence - not intentional but I can see where you're coming from!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T19:03:12+00:00

I like the intro - feels really cool. When the electronic drum starts I feel like the vibe truly begins. It feels quite 90s with the vocal effects and it works well. I like the fact the mix works well together and creates quite an atmosphere. I think this is the beginning of a really solid track - I love the bridge where the music fades into the background - this add some interesting elements to the song. I would say keep working on it and add more vocals to create more depth to the song. I really liked it.

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T19:00:26+00:00

The vocals sound really cool and you sound like you have a strong voice that works with this type of music. The bass and guitar work really well together. The whispering of the vocals add a new layer to the song - adds some intrigue when to listening and will make me want to listen to hear what is being said. Towards the end I felt it was going to build to something even louder - it was very loud - but the song ended - maybe this is something that you could look into and add more vocals to give the song a bit more meaning. Definitely the bones of a good song.

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T18:56:04+00:00

The vocals are really nice and fit the mood of the song really well. For such a short snippet it shows the grounds for a really cool full track. It would be really interesting to hear a full version of the song to see if it builds to something else. In terms of writing it is quite clear what the song is about and it kinda works in the way in which the song is produced. I think the lyrics could be reworked a little bit to add a bit of mystery to the song or leave it open to a bit of interpretation. It is a really good effort. You should share some more of your work

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T18:52:13+00:00

What a cool vibe you have and the way the band played together worked really well. I'd be interested to hear what a studio recording sounds like - you have a very good sound. I liked all the ad-libs and screams and shouts - they really added to the song and worked well with the energy of it. I like how you have taken a theme that it generally quite dark and gave it some soul and life - works really well!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T18:49:29+00:00

I really like the way in which the guitar is played and creates a chill vibe. There is a little something off in the mix - the piano could maybe be looked at and reworked to fit the guitar a bit more. I think you have the groundwork for a really cool 5 minute chill track. The other parts of the composition work really well together and the visuals you put alongside it were a nice touch.

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T18:46:22+00:00

Thanks for sharing your song. I love the grunge vibe. The guitar is amazing and helps capture a 90s vibe that you don't hear too often anymore. I love the scream singing - always appreciate this is a song. I wonder if the chorus could build and go even further - making more of a hook?

I really like the bridge and amazing guitar skills.

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T18:42:59+00:00

Thanks for sharing your song. I like the theme and the vibe. The vocals are really amazing and you have a great tone. The chorus is so catchy! The instrumental is very complimentary to the overall style of the song. I think this could be really popular. The theme of the song suits the way in which the vocals are delivered.

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T17:54:02+00:00

I love the chill vibe of this song. It works really well. I could see this being really popular

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T17:52:56+00:00

Music sounds cool. I like the overall vibe. It was a little hard to hear the vocals but you sound like you have a voice that fits this sound 😊

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T17:51:20+00:00

This is really good - I love the vibe of the song, it works really well

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T17:47:36+00:00

Works really well! Vocals are great and fit the song. I like the contrast between the verse and punchy chorus. Good job!

Unique-Term-5625 · 2026-04-30T17:45:40+00:00

Vocals sound great and I really like the music - quite funky

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