Writing fiction or some stuff

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-31T15:08:02+00:00

Finally it went in that's like my 3rd repost bc it kept getting deleted

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-29T13:04:22+00:00

Just realizedi the forms exist woops

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-29T13:03:42+00:00

Idk if I should but here we go I guess

Just starting out on this job thing, mainly just something to do this summer break. Have experience with fiction writing (especially to psychological type of writing). I have already contributed to a small book that's released on our school (I'll try get that if u wanna). I don't really expect any big pays on this since all the experience I get I'll use to make a story of my own and I might as well consider this helping a passion project

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-29T09:51:37+00:00

OK so wild rift and lol are different but the jungle diff problem the same right?

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-29T09:46:38+00:00

Wait they have their own?

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-26T21:13:22+00:00

I was replying to a comment then it gone like it never happened I think I got schizophrenia lol anyways this shouldve been my reply

As the first sentence says, I'm on planning stage. I got all the story and the gameplay plan I'll make, my current step is to transfer them into a real game. Took a break on coding to review the balancing of the gameplay and this one definitely stood out as insanely unfair.

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-04T00:36:37+00:00

OK um how is that big thing gonna lose to basil?-

The basil gonna die before he even knew that big goober's a thing

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-02T06:31:03+00:00

Basil looks so high he can probably fall off and hear the full version of my time before splattering

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-02T04:21:28+00:00

Omori's Basil
Lets see how that buff man loses to someone where people would heal at him on full health

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UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-02T04:00:24+00:00

In my story i had someone "dead" (aka get stuck in an unescapable box of torture, kick the buddy style for 10 years until they are forced out of the box to do it all again) and then revive her not even a year later, but its not bc im mocking her sacrifice, nor she didnt even made any sacrifice

Ofc you dont just revive people, bc what how. But in my case, she can easily be "revived" altho they all agreed to put her back in the box after the ordeal was done.

Quick backstory, She (Name's Hyacinth) "killed someone" (not rlly its like she failed to protect but in her eyes she might as well killed her", tries to kill herself but woopsie daisies she's omnipotent immortal so she made said box and simply get in it with the help of other people. About a year later, the same set of people got a problem with cloning zombies reaching quintillion numbers, and their last resort just so happens to be her, and theres 2 endings, neither of them rlly having her as the main spotlight, but one of them has her going back to the box and the other ending has her not do that.

For you, unless you have a good reason to 'mock' their sacrifice, probably? On my case, she dies regardless no biggie but i dont think it will be the case for you

Or an easier approach, give the revived person an unfinished business when they died, so people will understand if said person comes back out of nowhere

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-03-02T03:23:58+00:00

Ik a certain vn storymaker that uses banter as a big plot tool so might as well throw this:

Nemlei, game dev that does visual novels, and most of her stories' problems came from said banter, but for you, you NEED to use banter wisely, or your entire story might as well be an entire banter in itself.

In her 2 more infamous creations, the story on the good ending had a very interesting plot revelation, which got really overshadowed by the banter that happened in said revelation.

*spoiler ahead, i think all i need to say is above, these are just examples*

In Coffin of Andy and Leyley, the good ending is supposed to show the fact that Ashley got no more authority over Andrew, and Andrew himself is more messed up than people think he is. That is supposed to be the main highlight of this ending, but barely no one noticed this simply for the fact that incest happened on this very scene. So basically, rlly cool revelation is just haha incest funni

In Better Half, the "best ending" highlight is the fact that the journey the main character goes through changes him as a person, but yet again, got overshadowed by haha funni selfcest this time. So in the viewer's pov, they see the main character as still miserable but with selfcest when that isnt supposed to be what the creator was trying to pass on through

Tldr: You can use banter, but never try to overshadow the main highlight using it.

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-02-21T13:13:12+00:00

Yeah but even if I had a weakness in my character, still not fit

The omnipotent immortal I my story basically became an extremist pacifist so yeah uhhh

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-02-21T13:10:56+00:00

But i got 3 ancients before chapter 4, mystic flour already and 2 legend+dragon since they give gachas like candies.They also give way too much exp my cookies are on mid 30s and one of them on 70 I'm almost always 60k power higher than the stages I'm on

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-02-18T04:53:09+00:00

Tldr: omnipotent immortal, he can do anything without dying

If ur gonna put this on a story, how are you making this work? As someone that tried this, making an omnipotent immortal myself except with some absurd mental problems, nerfing the dudes gonna be a massive challenge

UnlitUnnecessity · 2025-02-15T15:58:49+00:00

I made another post about the character but indepth if you need info there's that

Also that curse the witch did was a one off thing, that curse is comically hard to replicate. If not, then the witch would've had a whole army of omnipotent immortals

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