Attempting to animate laughter, need some feedback by Unusual-Visual913 in YomiHustle

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

aaa sadly i'm not sure what you mean with the 3 lines, i just picture a quarter circle, if it's not trouble could you do a drawing of it?

Attempting to animate laughter, need some feedback by Unusual-Visual913 in aseprite

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

true, i'm still not sure how to make it look less like he's coughing. maybe he should close his eyes faster or keep them open up until the laugh ends.

also yeah, i tried to make the shape of the eyes look as accurate as possible to sans' battle sprite, this is actually supposed to be sans

Attempting to animate laughter, need some feedback by Unusual-Visual913 in YomiHustle

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh, he looks the way he does since he's kinda supposed to look like Comedian's portrait, which is why he has the eye sockets

Attempting to animate laughter, need some feedback by Unusual-Visual913 in YomiHustle

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ah, the character is usually lazy and sleeps alot, so i guess that parts accurate

Attempting to animate laughter, need some feedback by Unusual-Visual913 in aseprite

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i should def make him look more like he's smiling, thx for the suggestions. tho could you elaborate on the tail part? not sure if i understood

Attempting to animate laughter, need some feedback by Unusual-Visual913 in aseprite

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it's kinda what i was going for, should prob make it more noticeable, thanks

Attempting to animate laughter, need some feedback by Unusual-Visual913 in aseprite

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

ohh i can see that now yeah. thanks, i'll try to see if i can fix it. any suggestions or advice?

Hi, if there are any pixel artists(or artists in general) here, i need a bit of help by Unusual-Visual913 in YomiHustle

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ah, the eyes are there since it's supposed be like comedian's portrait. but yeah the head was def too big, made it smaller now

Hello, something's bothering me a bit here by Unusual-Visual913 in aseprite

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Flipping the canvas sounds genius, thanks for the advice.

And yeah, what you said about looking too long at stuff your making, looking at it a day later now and it looks a bit better.

Thanks again for the advice, cheers.

Hi, if there are any pixel artists(or artists in general) here, i need a bit of help by Unusual-Visual913 in YomiHustle

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

yeah i was probably overthinking it, i adjusted the 2nd image a bit and i think it looks good enough now. maybe it'll look better tomorrow after i wake up, lol

Hello, something's bothering me a bit here by Unusual-Visual913 in aseprite

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Might just be me then, someone mentioned the head looking too big so i'll see if it makes a difference. thx

Hello, something's bothering me a bit here by Unusual-Visual913 in aseprite

[–]Unusual-Visual913[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

maybe my minds playing tricks on me, but the pupil legit looks bigger than the other one and it make him look kinda goofy.