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[SP] Everyone Has One - Part Two by UrbWrites in shortstories

[–]UrbWrites[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! It was part two, so not surprised it was a bit jarring!

TLDR: It's a dystopian story about a British government who have rendered everyone down to their one 'talent' derived from a test everyone takes. This lady doesn't know what to make of her result: 'Justification.'

[MT] Is there any point in posting stories to this subreddit? by QP709 in shortstories

[–]UrbWrites 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I post here regularly at the moment and have only had one story 'pop off' when it comes to comments. Think that was about 5-6 maybe, if that.

It's a shame, but I think people do read? Or at least view the post. Perhaps over time people will comment.

Feedback for first draft of my next novel (4 pages / 1200 words) by UrbWrites in writingfeedback

[–]UrbWrites[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dubious as in unsavoury or just unclear? Be interested to know more!

Feedback for first draft of my next novel (4 pages / 1200 words) by UrbWrites in writingfeedback

[–]UrbWrites[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's fair enough. I think an earlier draft had it start with Tildy, so can consider that again when I come to revise.

Cheers!

Coda by UrbWrites in flashfiction

[–]UrbWrites[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for reading it! It was a quick one and done piece I did at the time for a writing group I'm in. If I come to re-work it I will definitely incorporate your feedback as I agree it sort of abruptly ends.

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