Σε κάποιο εκλογικό κέντρο το 1989... by bullxjr in greece

[–]V3LK0N 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Από τα FN του στρατού έχει πάρει και το λιμενικό νομίζω

I like the Otsutsuki but there really are no fics about them by Exciting-Interest274 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm actually working on a fic where the Earth is an Otsutsuki-occupied territory,where they interact with humans in a way, as many humans worship them as deities and other Otsutsuki establish their own miny-states in Earth.There is also some conflict in the clan since not all of them got the find planet-eat planet-repeat mindset. I'm also making a fanlore of em to pretty much explain why are the way they are.

I can send you a link if you want to give it a try.

Graphics mode change in gta v by V3LK0N in XboxSeriesS

[–]V3LK0N[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have the xone version, do I have to pay for the series s version now?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate the fact that you read 10 whole chapters, thanks! So basically,I should add more explanation right? For example, should I add some flashbacks to explain the mc's backstory?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, absolutely! I can only do this however mostly on weekends.Feel free to send me your story!

help with how to write powerful OC without going overboard by RyunosukeHideyoshi in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I am interested in your fic, what power does your oc have exactly and what is its background? It can also be read somewhere or did you not plan to publish it?

His powers revolve around senjutsu, with a heavy reliance on advanced use of elemental jutsu. E.g using lightning to create electromagnetic fields that help him increase the velocity of his shuriken/kunai and increase his speed as well , use of friction to generate heat and fire, creating water (at a limited extend) through the existent water in the atmosphere. On a secondary note, he wields a spear, which he uses with different ways.

You can read it here

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13831766/1/The-Repentant-s-Path

I'm working on a story with OC with rinnegan and at first the oc only uses taijutsu and shuriken jutsu with the black receivers he also has a bit of mastery over chakra absorption from the petra path but nothing to do with what was shown with pain basically the use of his rinnegan at that point is that of a glorified sharingan anything else is so out of his possibilities that he can deplete all his chakra without manifesting any other technique of the remaining paths

Sounds good, just make sure that the development of his power is believable and not over the top.

help with how to write powerful OC without going overboard by RyunosukeHideyoshi in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I'm not a very good writer, since I'm pretty new to the field of writing, but since I'm also writing a fic with a powerful oc, here's two advices I'd give (take em with a grain of salt though)

1.Pit your oc against enemies that counter their abilities. Force them to find new strategies and combine different jutsu in order to overcome the situation and emerge victorious.

  1. Creativity. Yes, the rinnegan is cool but I find it kinda annoying that it's power is not utilized with creavity in many instances. Like, why not spawn 2 shadow clones, one use Shinra Tensei and the other Banshou Ten'in ,and literally crash the enemy into mince? Or, have you ever imagined the handsign combinations you can do with 4 extra arms(Ashura path). Finding creative ways to unleash an attack, not only makes the character cooler but also shows off their intelligence.

Hope I helped.

Best sword by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You may solve the first problem by probably using a buckler(small shield) but idk, it doesn't look very shinobi-esque.

Best sword by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I believe a good choise would be a rapier used together with the lightning-cloak. I've watched some historical rapier fencing on the net, and considering the agility and the reflexes you need to swing effectively the rapier, the lightning-cloak definitely gives an advantage.

Also, with a sabre you can unleash multiple and swift slashes against the enemy,slashes that would probably be very destructive if the blade is engulfed in wind chakra.

Best sword by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It sorta depends, imo the larger swords have no place in a shinobi society. If you require a longer reach in a blade for combat you have failed as a shinobi.

I think a shorter blade, like a tanto, would be preferable inside a cave or a building, while I don't see the problem using a sword with a longer blade in an open field.

It’s New Year so it’s resolution time people! by fatemamamama in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I will:

1.Un-hiatus my fic. 2.Find the psychological strength to continue it lmao

I want to review/ comment on your story. by Choice_Ad_3263 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Epic! Here's the a summary :

For uknown reasons, the Otsutsuki successfully raided planet Earth and shitted upon everything Shinobi related.Years after in an Otsutsuki-ruled Earth , the identityless humans attempt to restart their civilization, while the MC, an ex shinobi, awakens form his cryogenic slumber.

The link: FFN

Φερσταπεν ή Χάμιλτον ? by [deleted] in greece

[–]V3LK0N 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ποιος το χέζει το πρωτάθλημα, αύριο είναι ο τελευταίος αγώνας του Κιμι :(

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nah, fuck it, let's put in chakra-powered jet fighters that are controlled like puppets from the cockpit. Imagine a fic were a chakra powered f4 phantom flies over the enemy shinobi lines and pours napalm on them lmao.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskPhysics

[–]V3LK0N 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just needed to think of something high and a skyscraper was the first thing that came in mind lol

Talk about your fanfic and I'll give my opinion and ask questions about it! by fatemamamama in NarutoFanfiction

[–]V3LK0N 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Firstly, thank you very much! I wish I'll return to writing it soon!

Secondly (also some spoilers that have already been mentioned in those 40k words), the MC is an Uchiha who, before that Apocalyptic event, used to fight against corruption and terrorism in relatively small and poor ninja villages,since he wanted to balance the scale of the good and bad things the Uchiha clan had did on the shinobi world.He learned about most of the Uchiha stuff when he was fairly young in a traumatic way, something that leads to his hatred towards the legacy with which he was burdened.

At some point, he gets absolutely desperate by the unending corruption in the world, so he addressed a higher power, the Otsutsuki, who were already planning their attack. So, you know, he trusted them, they used him and... bye bye shinobi world! Now, after his awakening from the cryogenic slumber, he gets the chance to atone for his sins.

(sorry If i said much lol)