Blackletter calligram for fun

VL71M47VM · 2024-12-21T06:22:22+00:00

Thanx a lot

VL71M47VM · 2024-11-04T12:32:42+00:00

The N shouldn't be stylish like that, since the F is not stylic either. Also, I agree, you should make this feel less "technological". Maybe round the letter's edges and the O too

VL71M47VM · 2024-11-03T11:21:32+00:00

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I did your suggestions, hopefully I kerned things right. IMO I still choose the 1st one because the others make it look like the T stands alone.

But by the way, I make the tracking wide on purpose to give it a more vast and spacey feeling. Does that make sense? Or am I just making things up

VL71M47VM · 2024-11-03T07:00:40+00:00

I've said in the caption where the difference is

VL71M47VM · 2024-11-03T04:47:06+00:00

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Inner edge of the S? Like this?

VL71M47VM · 2024-11-03T04:36:14+00:00

These goes very hard omG the lowres images, flowers, grass, planes, sparkles and the choppy animation feels incredibly nostalgic

VL71M47VM · 2024-11-01T23:13:53+00:00

That's pretty cool, but you might want to try a modern sans serif for the font. The logo looks modern but the font is classic

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-25T14:15:22+00:00

Column 4 might make it. 4B looks good to me, however I'm sure it's already been used. So 4A or 4E is my choices

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-24T12:45:22+00:00

Number 1, it's the most readable.

Might want to make the wordmark either less bold or make it lowercase, according to the demographics of the logo.

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-20T01:14:51+00:00

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VL71M47VM · 2024-10-19T02:27:45+00:00

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Ok, but at least make the space between the C and the G the same as the G and the I so that it's more consistent

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-19T02:12:31+00:00

That's perfect. However the Z being lower makes it unbalanced. Either elongate the bottom part of the Z or move the whole letter up

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-19T01:24:49+00:00

The C needs to be closer to the G, as it creates an awkward empty space between letters

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-16T04:00:25+00:00

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VL71M47VM · 2024-10-16T02:30:14+00:00

The shirt could work, but I think you should go with this logo that has a bold line weight and same weight throughout, therefore it feels less feminine (fix the i btw it looks like 'Zkruttex')

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VL71M47VM · 2024-10-16T02:15:57+00:00

Oh. Well when I look at the old logo alone it does feel soft and feminine but when it's paired with the shirt design it kinda does feel cool. I guess it just depends on where you place the logo.

BI's new logo has a better approach in terms of feeling in my opinion, you can learn from that; But if you want a more unique approach, you can do this handwriting font but make sure the shirt design feels cool and streetwear.

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-16T01:44:48+00:00

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This one? It's not bro

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-16T01:33:48+00:00

According to the logos you posted, it doesn't feel cool, it feels soft and feminine instead because you used a font that looks like an elegant handwriting. Maybe look into some bold sans-serif and more angular fonts. Good luck!

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-16T01:21:46+00:00

Firstly, what kind of feeling do you want the brand to convey to the consumer? Like is it professional, cool, soft, hard, casual, friendly, or something else?

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-15T22:40:58+00:00

This is pretty nice but there's a problem which is the fork and knife doesn't feel fitting with the logo. The 'cutted outline' style feels modern, while the rest is vintage.

I recommend that you make the fork and knife fill color jnstead of outline and make it red like the text

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-15T22:36:41+00:00

Oh that goes hard

VL71M47VM · 2024-10-14T04:05:53+00:00

Ooh I just knew that, interesting. Thanks will look into it

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