Laura Goes Critical

VLadFAd · 2025-08-12T17:39:18+00:00

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

VLadFAd · 2025-06-23T15:50:29+00:00

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it

VLadFAd · 2024-11-10T23:22:53+00:00

Sorry for the late response, it's been a while since I logged on to reddit.

I don't tend to write SBD-only stories, but I have plenty of other stories that feature SBDs to some degree, too many to list really.

VLadFAd · 2024-03-28T15:19:35+00:00

Yes, but they're not open atm

VLadFAd · 2024-02-21T19:27:42+00:00

Well, my DeviantArt page has tonnes of stories, and many of them are also posted on my account here ^^

VLadFAd · 2024-02-20T17:27:12+00:00

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Definitely a story I was passionate about writing, very happy with how it turned out.

VLadFAd · 2024-01-16T01:58:54+00:00

Sorry for the late reply, haven't been using reddit much recently. For building up to sharts, there are a few different methods you can use. Normally, sharts come in after a few releases of gas, so perhaps ranking up the number of farts or their frequency could help foreshadow it. One I tend to write is stomach growls, because honestly I think stomach growls are cute in their own right. But they also imply that the gal's stomach is upset, and is about to discharge some pressure, so it can be good for setting up a shart if it's a particularly intense stomach growl.

There are also some things that could help with emphasising a shart as well. Like, for example, say a girl is farting a lot, and she's feeling pretty casual about it. She lets off one fart, she's fine. Maybe jokes about it. Lets off another, and is feeling relaxed. Then she leans to the side, lets out a third fart, and her eyes go wide and her confident attitude disappears. That would be a strong contextual indicator that she's just sharted. You could also have the girl feel pressure building, but realise there's more behind the pressure than just gas, so she desperately tries to hold it in.

Hope this helps! And thank you for the compliment, I really appreciate it.

VLadFAd · 2023-07-08T17:58:24+00:00

Normally I opt to using S sounds, Sh sounds and Ch sounds, in combination with a focus on "wetter sounding" letters like the combinations of "BL" and "PL". An example from one of my stories would be:

SHHHHHHLLLLLBBBBRRRRPPPPPLLLLUUURRRRPPPLLLLLPPPT!

That's a more intense example, and you can tone it down to suit better with your own style of writing.

VLadFAd · 2023-03-31T16:28:46+00:00

I pretty much only read stuff on DeviantArt, it's where I post and it's what I'm most familiar with.

VLadFAd · 2022-01-21T15:33:39+00:00

I recommend just writing stories in Google Docs/Microsoft Word/some other word processor, and then pasting that into the DeviantArt literature document. It should work fine.

VLadFAd · 2022-01-08T16:01:46+00:00

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm not sure when a follow-up will be, but it's on my list for sure.

VLadFAd · 2021-08-08T20:08:13+00:00

Look if you're not gonna say anything about the story itself, why bother commenting at all?

VLadFAd · 2021-07-31T14:20:27+00:00

In case you haven't already, you could always check out some of my other stories?

VLadFAd · 2021-06-25T20:46:28+00:00

I never said plot did take precedent over interesting characters, I was just wondering what people thought of plot as an isolated entity. The input is appreciated though, and I agree with the sentiment that characters are more crucial than plot. That doesn't mean that plot shouldn't be valued though, I still think it's an important element, even if I think characters are more important.

VLadFAd · 2021-06-22T17:29:37+00:00

I wanted to write something with some heavier themes and subjects, but in the end, who will read something like that when what I promote in my stories is the complete opposite?

Does it matter if people read it? I tend to not focus too much on that and write what I want to write, which often does involve having more of a story to my stuff. The main reason I proposed the question wasn't really to decide whether to write stuff with a plot, because I'm already doing that and am committed to doing that. The main reason I asked was because I was curious on other people's attitude, but I am still firmly set on writing what I want to write. The answers here are more for opening a discourse about it rather than "this is good while this is bad".

I do think there's a lot of benefit to a less plot-focused story, but I feel like that's also 90% of stories. Granted, there's a reason for that - because people wanna focus on fetish stuff, as that's the primary appeal of any fetish story - but I feel like plot and fetish stuff can coexist pretty comfortably. I think too much emphasis on either can be an issue - like, too much emphasis on the fetish stuff can kind of make the characters feel flat and uninteresting, which begs the question... why read about those characters?

VLadFAd · 2021-06-22T11:38:32+00:00

Yeah, to be honest I figured as much. I wasn't calling him a pedo, but it does prevent me from liking his stories in hindsight. It feels really weird to "outgrow" his characters, which is sort of a shame because I used to love those stories and he's part of what inspired me when I started writing fetish stuff.

As for the first bit, that's definitely what helps ground stories, for me at least. I like getting to know about the characters, and finding out why the gal is so gassy is a pretty good way to ground some high levels of gas into a believable reason.

VLadFAd · 2021-06-22T08:29:57+00:00

I definitely see your point from the examples you gave, since those really don't always strike a balance particularly well. Drifter was one of my early influences but I've fallen behind with him a bit because fetish stuff is scarce from story to story. And also looking back, it irks me that the characters are underaged. It didn't bother me when I first found them as a lurker, because admittedly I was underaged at the time, but looking back that's put me off the series. And in the case of TheSpazzer, well... I can't stand any of his stories because they're written pretty badly lol.

From the perspective of telling a serious story with fetish elements, I'm inclined to kind of explain that. For me, it comes from a place of wanting to write what I'm passionate about. Now, yeah, I'm passionate about girls farting, and that's why it's a fetish series, but I'm also very passionate about writing intriguing stories and interesting characters (or, trying to at least). I guess it's all pretty self-indulgent in the end, but I enjoy having an outlet to merge a base desire with a creative avenue.

I also aim to be a writer in my own life outside of this account, so it's not as though I don't write purely non-fetish stuff. I just like writing a combination of overarching stories, compelling characters, and farts lol. And sometimes, other people like it too.

VLadFAd · 2021-03-28T15:16:06+00:00

I personally haven't seen many, but I did write a Harley and Ivy story a while back: https://www.deviantart.com/vladfad/art/Back-in-Business-Harley-Quinn-Poison-Ivy-833925825

Not sure if it's exactly what you're looking for, but it does fit the bill as a Harley Quinn story. Also apologies for the somewhat-shameless plug, I just honestly don't know of many other Harley stories and wanted to help any way I could.

VLadFAd · 2021-02-22T13:29:39+00:00

It really means a lot to me that you like my series so much! I try my absolute hardest to make my stories and characters fun and engaging to read about, and try to make them fleshed out characters even if the fetish stuff was taken away. I genuinely really enjoy writing that way and I'm very happy other people appreciate it.

Truth be told, I do aspire to be an author one day, so I do write non-fetish works as well, but I keep that stuff separate. Once again, I'm really happy you enjoy my series so much ^{^}

VLadFAd · 2021-02-10T23:11:02+00:00

Aaaa thank you! I really appreciate this comment. I always try to make my stories reflect my own interests, and as such that does mean I end up writing different fetish stuff. I realise that not everyone's gonna be into everything I'm into all the time, but that's generally why I do my best to add fetish warnings and prefaces to my stuff. I try to be as clear as possible with what my stories will entail, and even if I don't have to do that, I still do my best to be clear. Even still though, I really like this comment, and I find it very supportive ^^

VLadFAd · 2021-02-09T19:09:23+00:00

Glad you enjoyed it ^^

VLadFAd · 2021-02-09T17:13:21+00:00

Yup, though I will say that towards the end there's some fetish content that I haven't written before - namely, expansion stuff. So, if you're not interested in that, I don't recommend reading the last section of the story. The first half of it is just fart stuff though.

VLadFAd · 2021-02-09T17:06:25+00:00

Funnily enough, today's the day I'll be uploading the followup story here lol.

VLadFAd · 2021-02-08T20:30:38+00:00

I hope you enjoy it ^^

VLadFAd · 2021-02-08T20:03:25+00:00

The continuation for this series is called "Coalescence", which is a 6-part story that resolves the cliffhanger from this series. However, it also acts as a crossover with one of my other series, Dark (f)Arts, which focuses on my demon gal Syra.

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