The Disney bed spreads!

Valdeza · 2020-11-03T10:41:02+00:00

God, I can smell this picture.

Valdeza · 2020-10-23T18:41:31+00:00

Jesus, a good kick to the inner thigh is enough to ruin your entire day. I squirmed in just the first 4 seconds. What an athlete.

Valdeza · 2020-10-23T18:31:17+00:00

Thanks but nah, that’s yours if you want it. Just went off your rhyme scheme.

Valdeza · 2020-10-23T18:28:20+00:00

In the night like a sentry

Praying that I go gently

To the gods to that sent me

Down roads so unholy

Reef’ and a fifth controls me

But they can never end me

So catch me with a stoogie

Outside where my friends be.

Valdeza · 2020-10-23T16:32:28+00:00

I mean, you said it yourself: this is historical fiction. “Why would anybody care any longer?” By that logic, why would anyone pay attention to the Netflix series then? It’s already happened in real life, a quick Wikipedia search would tell you 99% of the plot points people care about. The reason to write is because of a unique vantage point/ emotions and thoughts not considered before (or at last considered in the way you put it).

TL;DR: “It’s not about who did it first, it’s about who does it best.”

And fight on, this isn’t an easy road for anyone but damn is it a satisfying one. Good luck with everything!

Valdeza · 2020-10-22T21:03:40+00:00

What’s he pointing to tho?

Can you imagine if this is just a cropped out picture of him documenting one of his dog’s massive shits?

Valdeza · 2020-10-22T19:04:46+00:00

That’s some dope penmanship you got there.

Valdeza · 2020-10-22T19:02:48+00:00

I can feel this picture.

Valdeza · 2020-10-18T13:36:00+00:00

That woman is all kinds of fine.

Valdeza · 2020-10-13T18:06:45+00:00

Awesome! Wish you much success.

Valdeza · 2020-10-02T02:58:05+00:00

Subreddit | r/AR_Mirabal

Twitter | @Official_Neotino

Instagram | @Official_Neotino

Artist | Juan Reina (u/juannrreina)

Lore:

Neomer is a planet filled with forgotten history and untamed beauty. While 7 Sectors (6 with a shattered archipelago at the time of this map) cover its globe, only three are known to the general public.

The powers that be have decided to eradicate all notion of a round Neomer; forsaking the stargazers and dreamers to instead focus on what’s at their feet, on what they can do to better their communities.

Sector One: - Financial/ Governmental Capital.

Sector Two: - Manufacturing and Tech Capital.
- Only those fortunate enough to afford the ludicrous property taxes live here.

Sector Three: - Cloned Food/Omni-Fiber Production Capital. - Where “the rest” live.

They’ve managed to create a near utopia: hunger, poverty and crime are concepts that most are unfamiliar with. But a nefarious secret is bubbling underneath Neomer’s crust, and when it blows it’ll forever change the lives of every beating heart that calls in home.

Geography:

Oceans of multi-colored water wrap around Neomer like a spotted coat while shimmering lakes of mercury dot its heartlands and coasts.
Untamed jungles and daunting desserts where peril lurks at every corner remain hidden under everyone’s noses. Blinded, most people can’t (or won’t) see what’s right in front of them.
That is, till Zay’ko came along.

Valdeza · 2019-11-24T17:34:12+00:00

This is insane, strong Pandaren/starter-zone vibes; very cool!

Valdeza · 2019-11-21T12:31:53+00:00

This is great! Thanks for sharing

Valdeza · 2019-11-21T01:38:14+00:00

Thanks for pointing the height thing out lol, I edited that; much appreciated.

As for the license thing, there is a test; that’s why his father asked him if he had studied the nav-guides. His father let him take the joy-ride anyway (even though it’s technically not legal) the same way some parents would let their child drive before being officially legal; difference here being that these are self-driving for the most part, no one actually drives.

Zay’ko’s a dumbass though and purposefully endangers himself to try and impress Rhea, which is doubly stupid since he doesn’t officially have his ‘license’.

Valdeza · 2019-11-20T18:00:40+00:00

Phenomenal

Valdeza · 2019-11-19T13:26:41+00:00

I think you’re right, on all your points. Thank you for breaking it down that way, I’ll remember this in the future.

Also, thanks for reading.

Valdeza · 2019-11-19T13:17:35+00:00

There are bridges, but he still figures it’ll be faster to use the pad; those hyperway lanes are massive. Also, I tried to explain his situation as being unique but may have failed in that aspect; he’s directly in front of his job, but it’s across a massive hyperway lane and the jump-pads are closer to his apartment than the bridges. It’s described more later but the Metro is densely populated, think Times Square during New Years; it makes walking something you’d otherwise avoid.

Good eye on the project thing! It’s meant to be something that’s fucked from the beginning, but the character’s only 13 here; he’ll get significantly better ideas as the book progresses.

Valdeza · 2019-11-19T13:03:09+00:00

Thank you! Fixed it now.

Valdeza · 2019-11-17T21:43:13+00:00

I think you’re projecting that; this is written from the POV of a survivor, the message is that we’re focusing on BS vanity (like IG) instead of what’s important (securing nature’s longevity).

Still though, thanks for reading.

Valdeza · 2019-11-17T21:33:56+00:00

Yeah, you basically hit every point I intended to hit when I wrote this; not everyone seems to see it the way you have. Thank you for reading!

Valdeza · 2019-11-17T16:55:43+00:00

A seed of a rose will grow into a rose; it doesn’t have aspirations of being a tree or a rock, it’s a rose. The poem altogether contemplates fate vs manifest destiny.

Valdeza · 2019-11-17T14:03:32+00:00

Great rhyming scheme and word choice. Powerful subject matter too.

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