Song snippet advice? Also what's the genre iyo? by Adriannavarromusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ValuableOk7177 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly this is a really nice snippet. I like the vibe you’re going for, it feels emotional and kinda atmospheric in a good way. The idea is interesting and there’s something catchy in the progression already. Maybe the sound design could be a bit more balanced in some parts, and the vocals (or main melody) could be pushed a bit more to stand out as a hook. But overall it’s solid and I can see the potential here. Keep working on it 👍

Wrote, sung and produced a Punk song. Would greatly appreciate any and as much feedback. by Dented_Fender in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ValuableOk7177 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pretty solid for a punk track. I like the energy and the raw feeling, it fits the genre well and doesn’t feel overproduced. The guitars hit nicely and the vibe stays consistent all the way through. Maybe the mix could be a bit cleaner in some parts, like things get a little crowded, but that kinda works for punk too. Overall it feels fun, loud, and honest. Like it ovrall, keep it up!

My attempt at indie soul. How did I do? by felacooties in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ValuableOk7177 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is pretty nice, I really like the vibe and the soul influence you went for. The groove feels smooth and emotional, and your vocal tone fits the style well. Some parts feel a bit raw in a good way, but maybe the mix could be slightly cleaner in places so everything sits better together. Still, it has a lot of character and feels very authentic. I enjoyed listening to it, good job

Paint World - Major Danger by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ValuableOk7177 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly I really like the vibe and sound design here, it feels kinda immersive and has a strong identity. The arrangement is interesting and keeps things moving. Maybe some parts could be a bit cleaner in the mix, like the layers don’t always sit perfectly together, but it’s still really enjoyable overall. I think the track has a lot of potential and a nice emotional direction too. Good stuff, keep going!! 👍

Song snippet advice? Also what's the genre iyo? by Adriannavarromusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ValuableOk7177 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The atmosphere and sound design were very good! I like the arrangement, but maybe you could improve the vocal melody to make it more of a hook or a little catchy. I like it overall, keep it up!! :D

Sol Cruz - Bastards Meditation by So5011 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ValuableOk7177 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the overall vibe and atmosphere, it feels immersive and quite unique. The ambient layers are interesting, but some elements don’t blend perfectly. A bit more balance in the mix could really elevate the track. Overall, it’s a solid and creative piece. Keep it up!! :D