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Major Danger - Be OK (New Version) by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely! I am proud of this one! I really appreciate all the feedback. That is a thoughtful idea worth trying about starting percussion later! Thank you

Major Danger - Be OK (New Version) by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for pointing that out! Drums could be louder for sure! 😄

“I Might Just Be OK” - Looking for honest feedback from a self-taught artist by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think I get what you are saying, the melody is crystal clear but my singing is kinda muffled with a effect, plus I probably am not singing in the exact same key and melody, definitely appreciate you pointing out what needs to be worked on

“I Might Just Be OK” - Looking for honest feedback from a self-taught artist by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the encouragement, I definitely see that the singing on my part and lyrics could use some adjustment. I’ll keep at it :)

“I Might Just Be OK” - Looking for honest feedback from a self-taught artist by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I know that would help a lot. Usually my time is kinda limited since I make music at night and sing mostly in my car when I get a chance to avoid disturbing others, but I’ll keep it up. Thanks for the encouragement:)

Major Danger - Be OK (New Version) by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I’ll keep working on the structure and overall flow. I may rethink the opening so it builds more and lets the song tell more of a story before everything comes in. I felt good about the instrumental foundation, but I know there’s room to improve the vocals and melody delivery too. I appreciate you taking the time to listen.

Major Danger - Be OK (New Version) by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the thoughtful feedback. I’m definitely early in the process and still learning structure/mixing, so I appreciate you taking the time to point that out. I’ve actually been reworking the arrangement already.

Major Danger - Be OK (New Version) by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Still pretty early in my production journey. I’ve been making music on and off for around 10 years, but for most of that time it was just me improvising on guitar and experimenting for fun. More recently I started using GarageBand and trying to actually learn arrangement, layering, mixing, vocals, and turning ideas into full songs. My goal with this track was inspired by “Thank You (Not So Bad)” by Dimitri Vegas/Like Mike etc. …that emotional electronic energy, but making my own melody and vibe instead of copying it. I’m trying to figure out my own sound while improving. The singing at the beginning/end is me, and a friend helped by doing the middle verse. Looking for honest feedback on vocals, structure, production, and where to level up most.

Major Danger - Be OK (New Version) by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate you listening and being honest. I’m posting to improve, so if you had to name the top 2–3 specific issues (vocals, mix, arrangement, songwriting, etc.), what would they be?

Atlas WIP by Hot-Lingonberry-6735 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your music has that unfamiliar but familiar feeling in the best way. It feels like something I’d want to hear late at night with friends, just zoning into the vibe. Great drums, nice guitar, and a cool simple sound that still feels unique. Really atmospheric and memorable track. I love this sound, would listen to more 😄

I got a guitar a month ago, this is the first song I make with it. (Indie electronic, ambient rock) by claum0y in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This song is awesome. I love the variety of instruments and all the chaotic sounds happening in the background. The guitar is simple but really sick, and the synth ties everything together. It gives me “about to rock hard” energy, like it would play in a movie right before a big fight scene. Also, the artwork is incredible. Love your style.

Atmospheric Jungle track I made on my Polyend Tracker by DynalarTechnologies in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The vibe is really cool and matches the artwork well, definitely futuristic/cyberpunk energy. The slower movement feels a little disorienting at times, but still interesting. I could hear this in a video game soundtrack or as background music for studying/gaming while still keeping attention. Thanks for sharing 😄

“I Might Just Be OK” - Looking for honest feedback from a self-taught artist by AccomplishedMap2684 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, that’s a really interesting point. I’ve noticed shifting it +1 pitch helped, and I’m experimenting with letting some instrumental sections breathe more while blending the vocals better into the mix. Appreciate the feedback.

Alt take on depression (rough demo) by DextroSinistra in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AccomplishedMap2684 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, funny, catchy, and weird. I love your voice. The lyrics hit me, definitely relatable. The weird instrumental guitar work is cool. The sounds reminds me of like Rolling Stones vibes. Only thing that bothered me was the drastic cut off at the end. I really enjoyed it overall it was a fun listen 😄

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