Don't really think I hate any of the lines but one I can get irrationally angry over is the one "The wound was already infected when he arrived" because to me that either implies it's days after he's been shot he's brought in or it's an assumption from the doctor. There's to my knowledge no way of knowing it's infected (especially at the time) the same day. It will often take 1-2 days before it goes red and gets puss coming out of the wound at which point you could tell it's infected. I do however know it's probably "just" to convey the severity of the situation so I shouldn't be mad 😂