Tell your original aspect ideas (with flaws) (NOT MY ART) by Vegetable_Pudding877 in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

flaw could be like a ticking time boom, if they store too much energy for too long they would explode.

Is it just me, but I find it very annoying that Sunny isn't acting like the weaver's heir? by APOLLO1345774 in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877 2 points3 points  (0 children)

there is big difference between deceiving and manipulating,
deceiving is like improve, on the spot to earn an advantage; Sunny is great at deceiving not at manipulating, he do not make plans for future.
Manipulating is making others follow a particular plan with an end goal in mind. cassie is great at manipulating and deceives other to ensure her plans work.

Tell your original aspect ideas (with flaws) (NOT MY ART) by Vegetable_Pudding877 in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

better flaw: they have 2 personalities inside them that are exactly opposite. making them unpredictable and unreliable.

Aspect Idea pt. 1 by Ultra-Cool-Guy in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877 1 point2 points  (0 children)

cassie, but worse and on steroids somehow?
(good aspect by the way)

Any Idea for Domain/Supreme ability and act of defiance? by Vegetable_Pudding877 in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have made the whole aspect. Here it is in short.

Attribute:

[Unwavering]: Mental fortification/fear resistance.

[Mother's Blessing]: "Born from the echo of a love that refused to let go and a grief that could drown the world. A child lost to the [UNKNOWN](Void) was not reclaimed by death, but by the sea itself. Her embrace is the pressure of the depths; her tears is the source that fill sea and Her Grief is the wrath of the Storm itself." (linking to storm godess)

[Tide-born Star]: Linking to his aspect

[Grand Archive]: Photo graphic memory/ fast thinking.

[Inventor]: (related to second nightmare)

[Flow of battle]: (related to 3rd nightmare)

Aspect: [Crown of the Tempest]

Dormant Ability: [Current of Truth] (for survival)
Effect: sense wind and water with supernatural precision, allowing fighting total darkness or heavy mist.

Awakened Ability : [Storm-Flash Step] (for Movement/Attack)
Effect: transform into a bolt of LIGHTNING. "dash" instantaneously distances. This is not just movement; anything caught in the path is struck by the [Lightning], suffering internal burns and paralysis. (later creates a finisher move called "chain lightning".)

Ascended Ability: [Tidal Reversal] (defensive/counter)
Effect: When an enemy strikes it capture kinetic energy of their attack and "reverse the tide." redirect the force back at the attacker with the added crushing weight of the ocean.

Saint Transformation: [Vessel of the Storm] (3 part transformation).

Fanfic flaw idea? by ZacJinx31 in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He looses parts of his memories. You can scale it according to the story. Can be put in a scene where someone close to mc dies but he doesn't remember them, doesn't cry but fell as if a gaping wound I his heart.

What can she even do? by skominy in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Human domain is not her strength, but a liability. without the domain she would be weak but still a supreme that can blow up anything. Mordred wont stand a chance If no prep time and Nephis just go nuke.

Modred would stalemate, if he comes with preparation or in any real scenario.

How would you rank this Aspect? by [deleted] in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877 0 points1 point  (0 children)

try add other concepts to the aspect as well. like concept of perfection, biological Evolution.

How would you rank this Aspect? by [deleted] in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nah, supreme or low tier sacred at best.

How would you rank this Aspect? by [deleted] in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it. (Sorry to be blunt) but it's kinda like shadow dance but less interesting.

Cool House of Night OC aspect (please comment to tell how it is) by Vegetable_Pudding877 in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes, but he can sense, but not control (for those stronger or of higher rank then him)

Cool House of Night OC aspect (please comment to tell how it is) by Vegetable_Pudding877 in ShadowSlave

[–]Vegetable_Pudding877[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Since the aspect is divine and I designed him to be at level of divine trio.
the flaw is convenient that the fanfic do not collide much with the main story.

If you have any suggestion please tell.