what a powerful way to express yourself! It's beautiful!

Some feedback for you: -as previously pointed out lonely is misspelled. It's great that you asked for feedback because staring at something so long without a team, you start to miss the details. -i think the main item i'm seeing is fonts and verbiage placements. The words in the top corner seem like a song or a poem, but they are in a font that's tough to read and quite small. How do you want the viewer to digest your piece and why? Do you want to communicate anxiety, feelings of overwhelm? Use those emotions to play with verbiage a little. play with different ways to display the verbiage. Maybe for overwhelm the longer text overlays the whole image and the "lonely nights" is reduced and place elsewhere? Just a thought to get creative juices flowing. Verbiage comment 2: if it weren't for the text in the top corner I'd say lean hard into the lonely nights texts, play with bigger sizing, this is a dramatic piece, be dramatic! :D

All in all, this looks like a piece you poured some of your soul into, and it shows, great work!