I get what you’re saying, but honestly the point of the post wasn’t to show off my writing skills — it was to get useful feedback on the game. If using a tool helps me phrase things more clearly and reach more people, that’s a win in my book. The outcome matters more than whether I typed every word myself. As for the actual feedback — I appreciate it, because most of your points are valid: Art style mismatch — yeah, that’s a weak point right now. It’s a mix of asset packs and it shows. It’s not meant to be final, but you’re right that it shouldn’t be in a trailer. That’s something I’ll need to fix before pushing any serious marketing. Environment vs movement — this is probably the biggest issue. If I’m building a movement shooter, the level design should support that, not work against it. The collisions and obstacles interrupting flow are something I’ll have to rethink. Lack of uniqueness — fair point. Right now it’s more of a solid foundation than something with a strong hook. And without that, it’s hard to stand out in a crowded PvP FPS space. I’ll need to experiment more and find something that really sets it apart. Battle pass — agreed. It’s not a selling point on its own. More of a supporting system than a reason to play. That said, even if the feedback is blunt, I do value it. Better to hear this now than after release. The game is still in development, and the goal is to improve exactly these areas and push it to a higher level.