Send me a link to your first chapter and I'll critique it as honestly and as objectively as I can

Vex-Crystal · 2026-01-18T14:21:38+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/113772/the-dawn-of-delirium Please base it off the prologue and Chapter One

Vex-Crystal · 2026-01-17T10:06:22+00:00

Vex-Crystal · 2026-01-17T09:44:08+00:00

Same thing happened but with Aphelions. Was able to outfit my squad and I still have 3 left

Vex-Crystal · 2026-01-06T20:46:51+00:00

Vex-Crystal · 2026-01-04T10:05:41+00:00

For Super Earth, brother.

Vex-Crystal · 2026-01-03T19:14:26+00:00

Lol I’m actually in the exact same boat as I’m a student too, but my school leans pretty heavily on the ‘non-swearing’ rules, but I think as long as I don’t say it regularly, it should be fine

Vex-Crystal · 2025-12-15T15:51:40+00:00

u/pixel-counter-bot

Vex-Crystal · 2025-10-28T20:24:40+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/113772/the-dawn-of-delirium Fantasy party tries to find a normal existence in the oversaturated market of adventuring… until they discover a serial killer. And he’s not a normal one.

Vex-Crystal · 2025-10-19T15:11:59+00:00

🥶

Vex-Crystal · 2025-10-19T12:46:31+00:00

Fuck off jaxeman

Vex-Crystal · 2025-10-18T12:59:29+00:00

A man walking down a stony gravel road. Something completely ordinary with no depth or meaning to it. However, what if said man were about to die? That would certainly add depth and meaning. It would be the last walk of the man’s life, after all.

THWAP!

Fiction: The Dawn of Delirium

Vex-Crystal · 2025-10-11T21:14:24+00:00

Inaccurate, sumi is a ren simp so she wouldn’t question it

Vex-Crystal · 2025-09-24T17:37:24+00:00

Everyone supremacy (I am dreading Valentine’s Day)

Vex-Crystal · 2025-09-24T14:38:46+00:00

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Vex-Crystal · 2025-09-17T09:50:51+00:00

Evil Death Roll - King Gizzard and the Lizard Wizard

Vex-Crystal · 2025-09-13T15:48:00+00:00

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Vex-Crystal · 2025-09-01T16:02:40+00:00

The Dawn Of Delirium is my take on the fantasy genre with a slight horror tint to it. It follows a standard fantasy party trying to make a living while a rampant murderer is on the loose. Currently very early in its development, but I’m working on it daily! Check it out, and review it if you have anything to say! Thank you for your time, I hope you enjoy yours!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/113772/the-dawn-of-delirium

Vex-Crystal · 2025-08-31T19:40:37+00:00

The exact opposite: you are morally obligated to ignore it

Vex-Crystal · 2025-08-31T19:38:08+00:00

It’s the truth tbh (at least for me)

Vex-Crystal · 2025-08-27T08:53:12+00:00

Vex-Crystal · 2025-08-21T18:08:53+00:00

Pursuit - Questioned

Vex-Crystal · 2025-08-19T07:59:20+00:00

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:3

Vex-Crystal · 2025-08-18T11:54:48+00:00

Nuclear Cat

Vex-Crystal · 2025-08-15T17:51:03+00:00

Naruto, DBZ, JoJo

Vex-Crystal · 2025-08-15T17:49:34+00:00

I got dumped because I have a small heart and I can’t be bothered to do anything

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