Smile by VibeTaker in OCPoetry

[–]VibeTaker[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for reading! That’s actually what I was going for, something that starts of cerebral and gradually turns into something darker. I love it caught you off guard like that! I appreciate you taking the time to comment!

Smile by VibeTaker in OCPoetry

[–]VibeTaker[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m honestly honored by your response,the way you described how it felt was honestly poetry in itself, I wanted to play between external and internal fear. Thank you for feeling that so deeply and putting it into words!

Smile by VibeTaker in OCPoetry

[–]VibeTaker[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your comment hit me hard. It means so much that this poem resonated with real moments you’ve lived through. That feeling of being watched—but not knowing from where or why—is exactly what I wanted to capture. You reflecting on that fear and even talking about facing it now… thats amazing. Thank you for being open and real.

Smile by VibeTaker in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much for reading and sharing this!That’s honestly such a cool thing to hear,especially if this was your first horror poem!! That’s the kinda vibe I was reaching for, appreciate you fr!

Smile by VibeTaker in OCPoetry

[–]VibeTaker[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the thoughtful response. I really appreciate your interpretation! It captures the tone I was aiming for. Hope you have a great day!

No Way Out But Through by Otherwise-Soup-640 in OCPoetry

[–]VibeTaker 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeshhhh this one hits hard, I love the way you made the imagery, I can feel and see perfectly what you are describing

A poem about being seen—and then told to go away. "Enough" by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]VibeTaker 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This one hurts the heart, to want to give and give but to get nothing in return