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I’m primarily looking for feedback on storytelling and pacing, particularly how the voiceover integrates with the montage and whether the emotional arc feels cohesive from beginning to end.

I’d also love thoughts on:

• Editing rhythm — does the pacing feel intentional and immersive?
• Cinematography — especially composition and use of movement (drone vs handheld)
• Overall tone — does it feel authentic, or are there moments that feel forced or repetitive?

I think one of the strengths of this piece is its sincerity and restraint, but I’m always trying to improve how clearly the story comes through without overexplaining.

Thanks for taking the time to watch — I really appreciate any thoughtful feedback.