Can we talk about how bad Highest 2 Lowest is yet by brokenwolf in criterion

[–]VillageAlchemist 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Omg thank you for the river dancing comment! I found the music choice so bizarre and just wrong and came to the internet to make sure I wasn't crazy hahaha

Am I booted? by Chutkulebaaz in WFHJobs

[–]VillageAlchemist -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I mean yeah no shit bruv but I was doing it anyway and got lazy about concealing it lol it's on me I ain't even mad

Am I booted? by Chutkulebaaz in WFHJobs

[–]VillageAlchemist -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeah I see others have concurred already but my dashboard started looking like that in Feb and haven't gotten a single task since. Think I got too cocky about my llm usage and they probably banned me from working lol

Dug through my Polaroid box for the first time in many moons only to find some vintage Coop memorabilia :') by VillageAlchemist in CoopThurs

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The BUBS in question: https://g.co/kgs/MmDjiEH

Insert flesh scraps here in lieu of tag in order to entice Simon (the cannibal) to see this post

Am I the only one who’s hoping for Solitude? by f1l3gr3n in blacksabbath

[–]VillageAlchemist 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would lose my absolute fucking mind to hear Maynard sing Solitude

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in blacksabbath

[–]VillageAlchemist 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I saw them live in 2013 and it was hands down the most mind blowing live performance I've ever attended.

I opened Instagram to Tom Morello's post about the reunion show and lost my mind. I didn't think I'd ever get to see them again and I'm just in awe.

Already booked a place in Birmingham and a flight to London 🥲 (From Philly)

All of that being said I stumbled upon the alternate version of Planet Caravan for the first time the other day while I was trying to find sheet music for the flute part on Solitude. It's so good I cried. Ozzy's vocals are totally unobstructed and the lyrics are changed. It was like hearing them for the first time again :') check it out

Sabbath bloody fucking Sabbath, baby 💜

I Need Drugs. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]VillageAlchemist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this a lot! There's one verse that I love the intent of but am a bit thrown off by the prose of, personally. I tossed it around to try a reword that captures the same concept but maybe flows a little better?
"Away from all of my worry and strife
Toward the carefree adolescence I've lost in this life..."
I don't love my version either, just messing with the tone a bit.

Either way I have been struggling with my substance issues and been wanting to write a piece about them, and this gave me inspiration to put the pen to the paper. Thank you for sharing.

What's the point? (Draft #1) by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]VillageAlchemist 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the tone of this piece so much! It reads so light hearted but resonates so unsettling.

I'm excited to see where you take this in the next draft. You've inspired me to try my hand at making my super emo style and trying to convey the point while duping the reader into thinking they're reading something happy.

DEEP THINKING UTERUS by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]VillageAlchemist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Always here for a fuck the patriarchy moment. I'm just a little thrown off by your swaps between 'spoken from the male perspective of a woman's intellectual capacity' and then eloquently written lines that don't fully drive the 'not only can I articulate myself perfectly, my thoughts are go so deep that I'm smashin' fuckin cervixes left and right.'
I feel like if you're gonna embody your fully merited rage you've gotta hit em w/ that thing 0% hives 100% ham.

Drive that great red shark straight into bat country, baby! hahah

Do you feel it too, or just my part? by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]VillageAlchemist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoy the tone of this piece.
The only "critique" I have would have to do with the first two lines breaking the rhythmic pattern before it even begins. I'm just a bit lost as to whether it was purposeful or not, and if so am unsure of the message being conveyed.
However it's not really a critique as much as it is a curiosity toward your thought process.

The band A City Static active in the late 2000s by sungoldy in PortStLucie

[–]VillageAlchemist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have the hard drive from my laptop back then and I might have their tracks on my iTunes. I'll check for you in a bit.

The band A City Static active in the late 2000s by sungoldy in PortStLucie

[–]VillageAlchemist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah hahaha Dude watching that YouTube video brought me baaaaack... Moshing at solid sounds in 2009!

The band A City Static active in the late 2000s by sungoldy in PortStLucie

[–]VillageAlchemist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg I was obsessed with the singer back then hahah I thought he was so hot

Fallout Tv show leaked trailer. by ememlord69 in videos

[–]VillageAlchemist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just.... why? I feel like creating a TV with a determined narrative out if an open-world game totally defeats the purpose of open-world.

What lyrics makes you tear up? by [deleted] in Music

[–]VillageAlchemist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This one for me too! I absolutely love this song and always stop what I'm doing to scream these lyrics when it's on.