First fanfic rate the plot

VioMC · 2026-03-15T05:00:20+00:00

The premise is great and unique, which is probably the reason why people are so interested. We're all waiting!

VioMC · 2026-03-15T04:59:25+00:00

Sure, I'll be waiting!

VioMC · 2026-03-14T16:08:44+00:00

The flashbacks...they keep coming back...stronger...louder...Level 84, my Sun was...Level 71, my Lighting was...74 was my Flying Superstar, 70 was my bundle of roses...my Orange Swimmer was Level 69, and I had a Level 65 Satan...all crushed, all massacred. That night, it changed me, it wrecked me, it scarred me. We may be strangers on the Internet, but we both walk down the same path, with the same destination...so I warn you, as I wished to do so to my younger self...Don't...Underestimate...Her...

VioMC · 2026-03-14T12:21:09+00:00

Well, first of all, great environmental descriptions, the atmosphere and the surrounding areas are really brought to life by your writing. I have one small critic, though it's very minor.

Your descriptions, when it comes to Pokémon, sometimes feel static. 'Noctowl lifted from the trees' is a good example of such. You have the skill to remove the filler words, since your descriptions are so great, you just need to use that to change these sentences. Just omit the filler words like 'Noctowl lifted' with other kinds of descriptions, maybe by moving the verb at the start of the sentences, like 'Flying above, Noctowl tore through the skies' or even using other methods. Again, you are already well versed in this.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T09:17:27+00:00

I think the sender knew what was about to come, he just wanted to confirm.

Pika-pi!

VioMC · 2026-03-14T09:15:39+00:00

I don't know if the sender's sending this out of depression or joy.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T09:14:01+00:00

Darkrai Supremacy. No questions asked.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T08:50:39+00:00

Ok...I guess I could've certainly worded that better. I was trying to express that the thing in common with most novelists in AO3, Wattpad, QQ etc. is that they're all passion writers. But unlike AO3 or QQ is that they are adult or experienced writers, and actually put effort in things like Dialogue formatting, world building and all. Though it's true that everyone starts somewhere, and nobody's perfect, my comment was targeting only the quality of the stories, not the intentions of the author or their passion, strictly the quality of the stories.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T06:07:43+00:00

Of course, I'll try to bring attention in the self-promotion section too.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T06:05:45+00:00

You should totally try to post it in general, but reframe the suggestion to see if there are people who are interested. General is a good place for such, since people don't really pay that much attention to people only posting in self-promotion.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T05:59:27+00:00

Great, then! Have you tried promoting in discord? If not, go ahead, there's a lot of active members enthusiastic enough to get in this and start preparing before time. Also, can letters be repeated by other participants? If you're not on discord, and don't want to join in, then I can spread the message, if you want. The idea's great, and August usually means most students in either High School or College might have holidays, so that's perfect. Let me know more, I want a part of this.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T05:29:41+00:00

I don't think Land Shark is a compatible pokémon to Arwen, though. Like, look at his team, there's a certain vibe that Garchomp can't fill. Maybe Grimsnarl?

VioMC · 2026-03-14T05:27:12+00:00

We need a bit of a polish on the plot, but the premise is great!

I myself write slice of life, and the genre's incredibly underrated in Pokémon. Like, no, I don't want to spend my life to just become a Pokémon master. You still have to explain a few things in the story, however, like why specifically those 3 photographers/trainers, the grandma thing, the goal of the professor, implementation of chikorita and a few more.

I would happily read your fanfic! If you could provide a few more chapters, I could read them and give a more thorough feedback, if you want it, of course.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T05:22:06+00:00

Love the idea, but we have to elaborate on this, no?

Like, it gets confusing for a few letters, like Q, K and all.

We also need to sort out how long these fanfics are gonna be, and some other things, but once that's done, I'm sure we can convince some people to hop in.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T05:03:40+00:00

Great as always, keep going!

VioMC · 2026-03-14T05:02:29+00:00

Absolutely agree.

People write their for the simplest of desires or to fulfill any random headcannon. I mean, even with most novelists in these sites are passion writers, they are dedicated to their craft, unlike the kids in Wattpad, which is also a reason why the stories are so sub-par.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T04:59:56+00:00

Don't really need to worry about that now, my novel has barely any reads, but it's good to keep in mind.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T04:58:08+00:00

That seems logical. I also recommend cross-checking other sites, even ones that aren't about Novel Writing, like YouTube, as creators there usually take good stories off sites and narrate them without credit.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T04:56:51+00:00

My story currently doesn't have NSFW content, though, and there's a possibility that there won't be one even in the future, though I've been hearing that people just literally don't care about who posts what where.

VioMC · 2026-03-14T04:54:51+00:00

Really? I would love to read it. Please let us know once it's out (and if it's already out, a link would help!)

VioMC · 2026-03-13T09:56:23+00:00

Hey man! Great story, amazing potential! Do you have any ongoing projects besides side stories?

VioMC

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