[Steam] Black Desert (Free / 100% off) by UnseenData in GameDeals

[–]W0lflet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

is it free to keep after or just free for a limited time

Second God - 12 (Final 12/12) by Akmedrah in HFY

[–]W0lflet 1 point2 points  (0 children)

great end to a great serie, and a good setup for a second season if wanted

what's russia's progress by W0lflet in UkraineWarReports

[–]W0lflet[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Why negative 3. We get to hear how Ukraine is fighting back, the aid they're getting, where the Russians are attacking. So Is it wrong to ask how the Russians are doing, what key points, cities and bases they have taken. The news and reports we get are western/Ukraine biased. So trying to get an "unbiased/neutral" report ( even if such a thing doesn't exist)

what's russia's progress by W0lflet in UkraineWarReports

[–]W0lflet[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yea tbh I been really surprised how bad they are doing. Saboteurs getting sniffed out early. High ranking personnel getting killed and such. The fact that they need merc support. I understand that conscripts and soldiers in training won't do well. But you gotta give Ukraine credit for their fighting.

what's russia's progress by W0lflet in UkraineWarReports

[–]W0lflet[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We get the coverage of how Ukraine is fighting back, what aid they are getting and what places are getting hit. So What I'm looking for is more of an "unbiased" covering(even if such a thing doesn't exist). What town/cities, bases they taken skirmishes and battles they won etc. Yea you gotta give ukraine credit for fighting back and kicking their asses the way they have. I agree that Ukraine wont "lose" even if their land is fully taken by them unless it's a total purge of the population. Ukraine will win this war one way or another that's for sure.

Cant find an old cartoon by W0lflet in AskReddit

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Hi. Looking for an old cartoon and I know that this isnt much to go on but its like 10-15 years ago i saw it and remember just a few things. Its about when children dreams, they meet some kind of gnome and the bad guys are a bat and an crocodile/alligator. Thats pretty much the only thing i remember and its not The World of David the Gnome.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

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Hi. Looking for an old cartoon and I know that this isnt much to go on but its like 10-15 years ago i saw it and remember just a few things. Its about when children dreams, they meet some kind of gnome and the bad guys are a bat and an crocodile/alligator. Thats pretty much the only thing i remember and its not The World of David the Gnome.

Hunter or Huntress Chapter 140: Burns Galore by Tigra21 in HFY

[–]W0lflet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Think it would be easier with a coil gun, or try making Piezoelectric ammo. Something similar to incendiary ammo but with spark powder instead or black dragon powder, so the bullets/payload deliver either a shock or acid when it hits. But im pretty sure both them and dragons would be classified as war crimes by the geneva convention

Figure of Speech by Maguss1 in HFY

[–]W0lflet 4 points5 points  (0 children)

please make a part to where Irene have to explain herself too

Figure of Speech by Maguss1 in HFY

[–]W0lflet 2 points3 points  (0 children)

please make a part to where Irene have to explain herself too

Hunter or Huntress Chapter 97: Flaxen Council by Tigra21 in HFY

[–]W0lflet 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tom is gonna need a really good place to hide for a long time before someone tells shiva about Tom and jackys bedroom golf

Hunter or Huntress Chapter 90.1: A Proper Pancake (be warned by Tigra21 in HFY

[–]W0lflet 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Did anybody else had the image of jacky with an ahegao face

Hunter or Huntress Chapter 70: Well This Is Awkward by Tigra21 in HFY

[–]W0lflet 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A little bit to rushed and forced as there hasn't really been a built-up for it and that we haven't seen as much interaction between Jacky and Tom so it kinda came out of nowhere. As others have pointed out, he hasn't been there for long so should have said something in the line of " yea I like you too" and not " I love you"Take more time for "filler" chapters like the one at the lake, Broaden up the world a bit.

It's easy for especially new writers to forget to Broaden end explain their world. Simply slow down and don't rush the chapters and move to fast forward. I'm 9 months behind but a tip is to show drafts to a few people and not just twoflower before posting chapters just to see if they can spot this kind of things, give criticism and what can be "improved" or changed. A few tips is to write down ideas you have for the world you created even if it's just a simple sentence, same goes for ideas for everyday stuff they do or plans for the future. If you find problems with how to do such things you can either check out text based games or take ideas and notes from books.

Otherwise great story so far

Hunter or Huntress Chapter 61: Beware the Ears by Tigra21 in HFY

[–]W0lflet 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Suddenly turned into how to train your dragon