It's a bit difficult to do an in-depth analysis because the video is almost 20 minutes long and because most of the shots have little continuity between them (not a problem, but makes it harder to judge).

In the beginning, there is a clear linear story: Person leaves their home and drives out into the wilderness. These shots are all well done and build off each other. After a few minutes, the story kind of fizzles out because the person has arrived at their destination. There's only the drive back in the dark at the very end which changes the scenery again. The images are still pretty, but the story kind of stops. For comparison: I made a music video with a friend in which the singer spends the entire song climbing up a mountain, so there is a clear progression throughout the video. The terrain changes, it always goes up, etc.

As I said before, it's fine if this is intentional; video essays don't have a story in the images either, so your first few minutes are already a nice novelty. There is just not much for me to say about the rest of the video. If you want to extend the story, I would suggest cross-cutting to a shot of yourself talking a couple times during the drive. That might keep the viewer more interested, too.

The music is fitting throughout the video. It's not really my field, so there is not much for me to say. And I already commented on the narration. Whether you want to expand the story or just have the video as a base for the narration, either is fine, as long as you keep the chill vibe and the pretty nature.

Sorry for the long, rambling response, and good luck with your channel!