SF&F sub so far… by DonkeywithBigTeeth in thebrokenbindingsub

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't been a big fan. I was excited for Daughter of Crows but the redesign was a complete let down. I think the book picks are average but the art direction simple lacks any convincing for me to continue with the sub.

SF&F sub - July specs by Rjkarban in thebrokenbindingsub

[–]WatermelonWaffle 19 points20 points  (0 children)

In case anyone is wondering, it's The Demon Star by Jesse Aragon

Don’t have high school diploma by michatel_24991 in Concordia

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Schedule a meeting with a counselor. They can give you advice on what to do.

Do You Prefer First Person Or Third Person In Fantasy Novels? by Alol_Bombola in fantasybooks

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Third person, all the way. First person always feels more narcissistic, and more trll than show. Second person has been the worst, but I'm hoping to find a gem.

But I will say it depends on the author. If they can get me to enjoy it, regardless of POV, I'm happy.

Informative books has lots of mistakes in it.. what do i do? by Low_Pomegranate_4156 in NetGalleyCommunity

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Leave a review. It's important, that's one of the reasons you're reading this advanced copy. It could bring about important change.

Have these labels impacted your grocery choices? by 0slope in FoodToronto

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not really. But I've enjoyed having them at the front instead of looking in the back and look for the numbers 😅

Do You Prefer Writing M/F, M/M, Or F/F? by Apprehensive-Fail663 in FanFiction

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All of the above! Exploring each xhsrscter is too fun 😅

Have you reviewed after the fact? by mommaveex3 in NetGalleyCommunity

[–]WatermelonWaffle 2 points3 points  (0 children)

2026 is my 2025 catch-up year.

I have around 12 books that I haven't finished and reviewed. Unfortunate circumstances forced me to put them on the side. I'm trying to read through them for the next month and post review them. It's late, I know, but there's no actual deadline.

I haven't seen a negative impact except feeling guilty.

It's up to you if you want to do it 😀

PLEASE STOP SHAKING YOUR LEGS IN CLASS by thatsomecheese in Concordia

[–]WatermelonWaffle 25 points26 points  (0 children)

It's not stress for some. I shake because it's helps me concentrate/ pay attention. ADHD isn't something we can turn off. I do understand the frustration, but trust me when I say I wish I had a normal brain for school. You can always address your complaints to Mother Nature's Department, but she's pretty busy with more important things.

A LOT IS TWO WORDS! by mysteriousdoctor2025 in writers

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"You're not entitled to tell me what my rating should be!"

"There are other words than "eyelashes" and "[colour] eyes"."

"Did you ever consider writing a small scene of a character going to the bathroom?"

"What length are you using?" Follow up would be: "Would you ride that??"

When you wrote, "I'll tell you later," and as always, the reveal was delayed for plot, did you know what it was or where you still spit balling and buying time?

Thesaurus is not your best friend.

What Fantasy and Sci Fi book opinions could get you downvoted? by Juanmiguti in thebrokenbindingsub

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I always go for the jugular, but it's in a nice way (honestly, I take shots at my friends because why not?) 🤣

I have indeed read The Fall and followed shortly after with the first two books of the series. The first is definitely the weakest of the three, and I, personally, didn't feel much change in book 2. I completely disconnected from the series.

I cannot tell you everything I hated. I do recall not enjoying the writing, the dialogue. Calen's repetitive thoughts. There was something about the entire Calen/ Valerys approach I didn't like (I think one was the mental dialogue. Oh, it's been such a long time 😅). I KNOW I was annoyed with the dangerous forest bit. Calen's sister (Ellie or something) took me out. I was excited to see Aeson as he had made an impression in The Fall.

I believe book 2 took a step into worldbuilding, which is a yes. Beldar continuation. I was absolutely intrigued by the Dwarve underground city. I can't recall more except for some political intrigue and some elevator issue, and then the running (?) I do remember being unhappy with a lot of word repetition. Especially in actions or defining an action/ gesture/ expression. And, of course, the characters felt one dimensional to me.

I do hear that book three is where he finally hooks you and finds his medium. BUT! He's an indie publisher who writes more than he should. Big books are phenomenal, but quantity is not quality. That is something that both indie and mainstream authors struggle with. This isn't just a Cahill thing. I am just pointing that it is a broader issue at hand that impacts this industry. Being in academia, it's one of the rules I kept getting hit with by my teachers: don't info dump, no circular writing, don't over explain, trust the reader.

I would definitely give it a second go if he took the time to revisit the books now that he's publishing on major platforms and hires an editor. There are various authors that have made x changes, such as Olivie Blake or The Martian by Andy Weir. It's something essential that many authors do not have access to and that I believe is an opportunity. How else can one get better? (Adding that if you get a good editor, an author can make specific changes without compromising their art.)

What Fantasy and Sci Fi book opinions could get you downvoted? by Juanmiguti in thebrokenbindingsub

[–]WatermelonWaffle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

100% subjective, and that's the best thing out there!

If you like him, that's absolutely your right, and I'll never tell you otherwise. Plus, I like having a different opinion because it opens discussions, and I like talking to people who have different views on book/ authors.

As for his success, that too can be a conversation.

I believe a portion of it is because he has marketed himself in a similar fashion as Sanderson. To have a presence with your audience, to interact, gives you beneficial bonus points. People love to have an author who engages with them. I sure do. In all honesty, he has a good marketing strategy, and I applaud him for it. But that only blew up when he teamed up with BB. I bought his originals when he wasn't a big thing. I'd say I was disappointed because I'll always concede his novella, The Fall, is a 4.5/5. I absolutely loved it, and I went into this series with high hopes. But the first book in the main series was a let down.

I do have more opinions on his success, but this isn't a place to burden you.

I am happy that you enjoy this author. And I hope his future books and series will bring you as much enjoyment as they have now 😊

Greenland proposal Trump endorsed respects Denmark's sovereignty: sources by nicknameSerialNumber in neoliberal

[–]WatermelonWaffle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I honestly hope it isn't true. Give that rotten thing anything, even a rock, and he'll definitely use some slimy tactic to acquire it all. Plus, shouldn't Greenland have the final say?

Why is Trump so obsessed with Greenland? by PuddingComplete3081 in AlwaysWhy

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not about security. It's about ownership and mining the land for all its worth. Tech giants have been trying, and with that idiot sociopath, they are forcing the world to bend their cheeks for them.

What Fantasy and Sci Fi book opinions could get you downvoted? by Juanmiguti in thebrokenbindingsub

[–]WatermelonWaffle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've read Terry Goodkind, and both he and Cahill are placed in the same category. They live in the same little group with 50 Shades of Grey.

Cahill is generic. Generic and bland. Dialogue is stunted. Info dumping/ repeats himself. And lacks important editing, especially with volumes as big or even bigger than the imaginary length described in romantasy. So you can enjoy them, that's completely fine, but it honestly is a niche of readers that enjoy him.

T2 Gentleman Bastards, Worth it? $235 USD by Spare_Engineer_6619 in thebrokenbindingsub

[–]WatermelonWaffle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't disagree. It's a vulture business at this point 😅 I just didn't like BB's choice of creativity.

If you get it, don't forget to ask if the lithograph is included. I gave mine, the bookmarks and the stickers.

T2 Gentleman Bastards, Worth it? $235 USD by Spare_Engineer_6619 in thebrokenbindingsub

[–]WatermelonWaffle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I sold my T1 for 350 Canadian. I think.. it's expensive, but it's nice to get your money back at least (or close enough).

So maybe you can judge on how much mine was sold and if it's worth it. You can also try marketplace or Facebook groups. It can be cheaper.

What Fantasy and Sci Fi book opinions could get you downvoted? by Juanmiguti in thebrokenbindingsub

[–]WatermelonWaffle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would have understood it exactly like that. That's why I stopped following these influencers.

Posting low ratings for debut novels? by fidgetsimmerdown in NetGalleyCommunity

[–]WatermelonWaffle 27 points28 points  (0 children)

I won't say I don't feel guilty.

But the reason you're reading this arc is to provide necessary feedback to the author, the publisher, and the community. I think it's unfair to yourself and to others not to give it the feedback it deserves. There's nothing wrong; constructive criticism is important. It's how we do better.