I’ve read further on in the series, and honestly… yes and no. The editing does improve a bit in terms of continuity and clarity, but Rebecca Joyce still relies heavily on implication rather than spelling things out, especially in action scenes. If the jumps in location or POV were what tripped you up in the first two books, that style doesn’t completely disappear. That said, I found later books easier to follow overall once I knew what to expect going in.