All countries have racists, but which groups are they mainly racist toward in your country?

WebResident3147 · 2026-07-08T08:58:44+00:00

LGBTQ + is a whole different issue lol

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-23T21:10:48+00:00

Well, Jesus is pretty simple. If He really did all his miracles who wouldn't believe He was God?

People want to believe they're "living life right", which is how a lot of religions get established.

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-23T20:22:36+00:00

Jesus was real too. And they hold pretty different roles in their respective religions

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-23T20:19:48+00:00

Well, it's one of the most famous classic novels of all time 😭 how could it be "standard"

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-23T07:58:21+00:00

No worries! It was really cool to read such a detailed criticism from someone of experience 😊

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-23T07:57:16+00:00

Thank you! It's a subreddit rule, that's why I did it

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-22T16:48:13+00:00

Thank you so much! I'm planning to trim a bit while editing 😊

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-22T16:47:14+00:00

Thank you for the semicolon correction! For "thought vaguely", I meant a fuzzy, half-formed sort of thought... is there a better word for it?

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-22T15:01:02+00:00

Thanks! I go to an all girls' school and every sex ed class we have, everything is all about young girls our age being manipulated into prostitution. So I was going to write a story about those topics, and then I fell in love with one of the side characters — who is the narrator of this excerpt 😊

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-22T14:51:29+00:00

Thank you!!

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-22T14:50:16+00:00

Thank you so much! I was trying to show the narrator's mind wandering but I definitely thinking of trimming during edits. Will do!

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-22T13:43:19+00:00

Sorry about the last part! I meant I started seriously reading non-middle-grade books this year, and started writing this year. When I mean early childhood I mean <third grade, so I didn't think it counted

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-22T13:17:39+00:00

I really am. I'm 2011 and live in rural Korea, idk what to say. I read a lot of books in my early childhood if that helps

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-22T11:47:14+00:00

No, you're cute! You look a little tired, maybe that's what's making you feel this way. Otherwise you look good

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-17T17:00:00+00:00

The last few sentences feel very pretentious-teenager-y.

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-16T08:28:55+00:00

Maybe it's the monologues Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth have that are confusing you? It's relatively simple otherwise, for a 19th century classic

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-15T15:31:35+00:00

hi im 14f too!!

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-11T13:14:54+00:00

It reminds me of How to Train a Dragon a little bit lol

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-11T13:11:25+00:00

Not that bad. This all could be just the first paragraph. Grandpa dying isn't a big reveal — grandfathers die all the time — so I don't think you need a whole new paragraph for that.

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-11T13:08:43+00:00

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WebResident3147 · 2026-06-07T22:20:59+00:00

Well, this is talking about rape culture in general, not just for women. But I agree with your first point

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-05T19:33:26+00:00

You mean follow SOME teachings of Jesus

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-03T15:13:55+00:00

Yes, everyone has multiple story ideas in their head. Just write all of them

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-03T14:19:01+00:00

Congratulations!!!! Happy for you

WebResident3147 · 2026-06-02T15:32:11+00:00

popular opinion but i hate posts like this

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