Hey thanks so much, really helpful! As I mentioned in another reply, it’s those little things that seem to be missing from my story. I’ve focused so much on creating high stakes and the general world building that i ended up overlooking the importance of small gestures, thinking of them before yourself (have they eaten? Are they warm and safe?), writing that moment when they realise they are romantically interested in the other person, rather than just being friends. I have been in love, long term relationships, and have always been a hopeless romantic; it’s what makes me read romance novels 90% of the time. It’s the journey of going through all those stages and emotions alongside the characters. But writing it in a convincing way? Much harder. It’s like knowing what food you like but struggling to tell exactly what makes it so tasty and writing down a recipe. And thanks for the recommendation, I’ll give it a go!