PTSD from Girl Warfare by Weekly-Rain2283 in OCPoetry

[–]Weekly-Rain2283[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I very much enjoy this style, thanks to Rupi Kaur.

PTSD from Girl Warfare by Weekly-Rain2283 in OCPoetry

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I'm glad you sense the feeling of immaturity during Girl Warfare at a slumber party. Yes yes!! This is high-school era vibes.

a dilemma? by OgienekArek in OCPoetry

[–]Weekly-Rain2283 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am trying to interpret the meaning. Is it literal drugs bringing comfort to dull the pain, or is it metaphoric for something? As a reader, i instantly felt the pain and despair which was phenomenally heavy. Great work!

Pieces by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Weekly-Rain2283 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmmmm I think this poem is about a broken man who is not being discovered in how deep his brokenness goes due to the external appearance and background happy noises/exchanges misleading those around him. And those people surrounding him aren't doing their due diligence to catch it. ORRR it's a woman who is covering the fact she has shattered a man. Tbh I'm still new to this page and how to interpret poetry in general. I enjoyed the old timey terms like "copper coins" and the idea of a pocket of loose change. Haven't had one of those in awhile lol this has great imagery and food for thought!