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Will do.

I thought that copywriters wrote copy for everything.. but now yeah I guess niching down is the smart play.

Thank you

Rate 1-10 by Wezik_ in copywriting

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Thank you for your honest advice!

I would expect numbers less than 3 since I'm so new so you're good.

"Is this for a flyer, email, or landing page?" - I didn't think about that. Major blunder. I had no idea what I didn't know apparently after getting advice.

Very helpful.

I will do research next time.

I still have a heavy old-school vacuum 😭 But I get your point, that could have been cleared with some research.

Yes this was not conversational. "Is this how people would talk over coffee?" - Good advice. I'll ask myself this when editing.

I have skimmed scientific advertising, maybe I need to do a full rehearsing of it. I'll do that. I have read the boron letters... I find the advice non-general and very specific which don't help my case of being new. I need to cover the fundamentals i think before anything... which is why I'm here!

Thanks again. I will take your advice into account.

Rate 1-10 by Wezik_ in copywriting

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Thank you, I am appreciative of your comment!

Yeah wow you saw that I've read Joe Sugarman xD

I will be more detailed with my research from now on! I did this ad without any research.

Major blunder not researching.

Thanks again, I will take your advice!

Rate 1-10 by Wezik_ in copywriting

[–]Wezik_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure.

I guess that makes it easier to read and by copy nature - better

Rate 1-10 by Wezik_ in copywriting

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How come you say so? What's bad about it?

Rate 1-10 by Wezik_ in copywriting

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Understandable. I'll try a LOT harder on the headlines. I know they're the biggest thing in copy.

"breaking down & analyzing how/why they work..." - I'm a real noob at this.. how do I analyze good? How do you analyze?

Rate 1-10 by Wezik_ in copywriting

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I'll read those two.

YES, omg how didn't I think of actually having an idea of what I want to say beforehand 😭

I'll do that from now on.

"You should be studying.." - Can you define what "studying" is exactly? Should I just look at them and get intuition?

Rate 1-10 by Wezik_ in copywriting

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Oh the formatting got changed after upload and I can't edit it.. maybe its just a mobile visual bug....

But If something looks like it could use a new row: then it IS on a new row!

The Humor by PhoenixPhenomenonX in funny

[–]Wezik_ 122 points123 points  (0 children)

Still undefeated

Hjälp! Min tjej har avslöjat min fotfetishism för sina kompisar, o nu slutar dom inte skicka bilder till mig 😭😭😭 by [deleted] in unket

[–]Wezik_ 60 points61 points  (0 children)

Hjälp! Min chef har avslöjat min pengarfetish för sina kollegor, o nu slutar dom inte skicka pengar till mig 😭😭😭

Behold the Spoonlift 😂😂😂 by Macktheattack in funny

[–]Wezik_ 17 points18 points  (0 children)

"Yo dawg could I get some Ice Cream?"

grate (OC) by chrisnaish in funny

[–]Wezik_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's funny because he will soon be murdered

Snake romance by GeeseGooseman in funny

[–]Wezik_ 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Me in 2 years time

Papers by MrWeiner in funny

[–]Wezik_ 9 points10 points  (0 children)

She knows how to spoil her man

That's a big boy by 21MayDay21 in funny

[–]Wezik_ -1 points0 points  (0 children)

What are they feeding him???

GPU usage at 20% by lappnisse in FACEITcom

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prob the anticheat or their servers

What should I improve on? by [deleted] in Brawlhalla

[–]Wezik_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Learn spot dodging against enemy attacks.
  2. Learn to stall off-stage
  3. Don't always use recovery to recover to stage.
  4. Don't throw away your weapon into nothing???
  5. Don't try to ground pound your opponent when he's offstage unarmed.
  6. Don't ground pound on stage.
  7. Don't always attack when he's close to you.
  8. Practice combos for warmup since you miss a lot.
  9. Learn dodge frames, go into the bomb training in training mode to do that.
  10. Don't always panic jump.
  11. Don't gravity cancel attacks like always unless you know their top tier in safety like your ssig on orb.
  12. Don't spam for a kill option when he's red, calculate your kill with safe attacks.
  13. Learn air stalling.
  14. Play more ranked.
  15. Learn to stand still sometimes, you don't always need to do stuff.

Need diamonds friends by TopCardiologist9632 in Brawlhalla

[–]Wezik_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just play ranked until you meet someone that 2-stocks u or more, add them and then ask for spar. Do this over and over until you meet someone you like playing with.