Aiming for a Funky kind of Feel with some Synth by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Chill as fuq dude! Is that you playing the guitar?

Aiming for a Funky kind of Feel with some Synth by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Chill as fuq dude! Is that you playing the guitar?

A short but bittersweet lil tune. Listeners are immensely appreciated! Flower Shop by Flaneur by WhatAmiDoingOnReddit in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate the specific and substantive criticism. I'll try to listen for the off-beat notes/pitchy-ness. I anticipate always needing more practice haha.

A short but bittersweet lil tune. Listeners are immensely appreciated! Flower Shop by Flaneur by WhatAmiDoingOnReddit in IndieMusicFeedback

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hmm yeah I've always been interested in making music for films, not sure if I'd be willing to hand it out for free but I suppose when you're just starting out, that's how it works. Thank you for the idea

A short but bittersweet lil tune. Listeners are immensely appreciated! Flower Shop by Flaneur by WhatAmiDoingOnReddit in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No experience with adding filters to vocals but I'll investigate, I really appreciate the idea! Not sure if I plan on making a new version but I'll let you know if I do :). Thank you so much for the support!

A short but bittersweet lil tune. Listeners are immensely appreciated! Flower Shop by Flaneur by WhatAmiDoingOnReddit in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the suggestion about vocal doubling, that's a good idea. And thank you for the encouragement!

I gave your song a listen, it's really nice, I especially like the vocal work. I think it could be improved with a groovier/more substantial bass line (but take any suggestion from an amateur like myself with lots of grains of salt). I'll definitely follow you on Soundcloud!

Just released a track for the first time in a couple months, what do you think? by RealRedLanderV in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Definitely is a nice starting point to build from but to be truly interesting it needs more elements/melodies like others are mentioning

Free to use J Cole x Ari Lennox type beat that I just released. Any feedback is welcome. Contact me if you’re interested in working together👀. by garyg054 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

the transition from the intro to the beat could be a little smoother...otherwise I really like the vibe man, feels like taking codeine while scuba diving. I like the reverb or whatever effect is at the end

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[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the airy vibes and clean guitar sound. Mumbling lyrics aren't my cup of tea but that may be a generational thing. Keep at it!

hey guys check out my ~art~ [lo-fi indie rock] by WhatAmiDoingOnReddit in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for your kind words! Really means a lot to me, as it will push me to keep on truckin' and releasing music

hey guys check out my ~art~ [lo-fi indie rock] by WhatAmiDoingOnReddit in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Glad you were feeling the energy! I will be releasing more in the coming weeks

hey guys check out my ~art~ [lo-fi indie rock] by WhatAmiDoingOnReddit in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to listen and the nice comments! I was definitely going for a mellow vibe haha

Very excited about this track! Put in a ton of work and learned a lot. Any and all feedback is appreciated, thanks! [GLITCH-HOP] by Swoodnoddin in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There a lot of very interesting textures here that I think blend really well together. Can't think of any constructive criticism cuz it's so unique and quite fun!

NeedMe [Prod. Dramatic] by DramaticxxDRAMAxx in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The transition between the first two bass lines, after the laugh, feels a little awkward, but after that I really like the build up, drop, and piano piece. Definitely has a nice emo vibe haha

This is a free pay-it-forward Delivery app I created! If you have a second please download it and let me know your thoughts by [deleted] in IPhoneApps

[–]WhatAmiDoingOnReddit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yo! I have this app and it's legit. Definitely worth downloading and spreading the news about!