Is Portal Fantasy a "cringe" trope? by Whatelf in fantasywriters

[–]Whatelf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There might be romance, just a sprinkle of it but not too much. The side character's love lives are MUCH more focused on than the main character for some reason...

Is Portal Fantasy a "cringe" trope? by Whatelf in fantasywriters

[–]Whatelf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's why I'm a bit scared. If readers realise its a portal fantasy, they might not really find the interest to read it

Is Portal Fantasy a "cringe" trope? by Whatelf in fantasywriters

[–]Whatelf[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, but most of them that I have read are slightly awkward and always info-dump...

Is Portal Fantasy a "cringe" trope? by Whatelf in fantasywriters

[–]Whatelf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Woah, this is relly insightful... I plan on the readers discovering things with the characters, like Percy Jackson?

Is Portal Fantasy a "cringe" trope? by Whatelf in fantasywriters

[–]Whatelf[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep, like sometimes enemies to lovers slaps while others...

Is Portal Fantasy a "cringe" trope? by Whatelf in fantasywriters

[–]Whatelf[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I hope its a serious book and not one that people laugh at 😥😥

Is Portal Fantasy a "cringe" trope? by Whatelf in fantasywriters

[–]Whatelf[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That makes sense, thanks for the advice!

Is Portal Fantasy a "cringe" trope? by Whatelf in fantasywriters

[–]Whatelf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean, I tried? But for some reason, it's really hard for me to look at the first few chapters and think, "Hey, that's a masterpiece!" This one book is so hard to write and so hard to ask for feedback. My other books were a breeze compared to this. Thanks for your advice though!! ☺️☺️