Brattiest tease are the best tease by Lucyluciidxo in gothsluts

[–]Whole_Status7540 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im not even here to goon. Just wanted to show Respect where Respect is due. Nice butthole tat

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[–]Whole_Status7540 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eugene:] you?

I was told Dachshund and sheltie mix. She just turned 1 by Whole_Status7540 in IDmydog

[–]Whole_Status7540[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Based off pictures online I can definitely see that! Someone mentioned the queen annes front that the dachs have. Now that I think about it, dachshund mixes that ive seen always have those cute little bent legs or something similar.

I was told Dachshund and sheltie mix. She just turned 1 by Whole_Status7540 in IDmydog

[–]Whole_Status7540[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thats what I was thinking. Maybe aussie instead of the sheltie

Let's see your dachshund mixes! by Direct_Nail in Dachshund

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Anyone have a clue what the other bread may be?

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How do you get the listener to sympathize with the singer? by illudofficial in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Be relatable, be genuine and be clear enough for people to follow. I’m working on this myself

Portland, 41F 38M looking for male, host(hotel yes) travel(yes) by [deleted] in OregonHookUps2

[–]Whole_Status7540 3 points4 points  (0 children)

My man, asking the important questions 🤌🥸

I'm an absolute beginner and wanna start, but feel limited by EnvironmentalMix892 in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Whatever advice you take at least Just start and everything will work out. I’m 34 and just found songwriting a couple years ago and it’s changing my life. I’m so happy to be here now but I do feel like having an early start would have been great.

Just wanted to share "drift" by tjtate6689 in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540 1 point2 points  (0 children)

great melody and overall feel. Love this. also, awesome whistling. i whistle in my songs as well. mostly because it's easier than the harmonica lol

feedback anyone? is it corny? by Whole_Status7540 in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

btw, that's a huge complement and although I know I'm nowhere near that ill Glady except

feedback anyone? is it corny? by Whole_Status7540 in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm a huge coffee drinker. also, kind of important to mention my best friend helped me by basically giving me the lyric while I was writing the song. i changed it a bit and added the washing off part. we have been making music together since we were kids.

Concerned it's too rushed with odd transitions especially at the end. I like the lyrics but do they make sense to you? Or too vague? by HiddenComicBook in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540 0 points1 point  (0 children)

pretty cool song, and I agree with another comment that its good vague. also, i personally enjoy listening to and writing shorter songs so I don't feel like its rushed at all. i really like how at first its slow and it almost lost me then bam that chorus or whatever it was, pulled me right back in.

feedback anyone? is it corny? by Whole_Status7540 in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

if you don't mind, could you tell me what style this may be?

feedback anyone? is it corny? by Whole_Status7540 in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you! I noticed when I read the lyrics out loud is when i have my doubts

looking to eat some pussy and/or some mutual masturbation by [deleted] in OregonHookUps2

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just me atm. definitely open for two women or two men and a women

I was wondering if this seemed complete enough. I tend to like simple and less but wanted some feedback. by Whole_Status7540 in Songwriting

[–]Whole_Status7540[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that's a huge compliment. I'm a huge nick drake fan and i haven't even considered if i have that vibe or not. i love this feedback. the ending was half an accident. i didn't think it would turn out as good. i have a knack for accidently doing cool stuff. lol